for Freshman Year11/22/2004 c7 
16kaika switched
Pretty good story. Ronnie seemed like...bi-polar in the first couple chapters for some reason, but I'm just assuming it was her sarcastic demeanor that made her that way. But I kept reading and it's really good. I love Josh. Love the name. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedPretty good story. Ronnie seemed like...bi-polar in the first couple chapters for some reason, but I'm just assuming it was her sarcastic demeanor that made her that way. But I kept reading and it's really good. I love Josh. Love the name. Keep writing!
8/15/2003 c7 2inconsequential me
O... Dun, dun, dun. Poor Ronnie! Well, no, not poor Ronnie...Poor Devon :( Heh... I feel sorry for him... Ronnie shouldn't of kissed Josh...(even if i want them to get together! Heh...) She shoulda broken up with Devon, first...and THEN kissed Josh... Gah... This is sad, because now Ronnie's gonna feel all bad about herself...and she's not going to give Josh a try because she feels so awful...
Ok, maybe not, but my mind likes to wander, and that's what i came up with...Lol. However, this is your story, so i'll let you take it where you want it to go... And hopefully that means they'll get together...soon. Heh. Kudos! Depressing chapter, but every good story has at least a few of those... Great job...:)
2inconsequential meO... Dun, dun, dun. Poor Ronnie! Well, no, not poor Ronnie...Poor Devon :( Heh... I feel sorry for him... Ronnie shouldn't of kissed Josh...(even if i want them to get together! Heh...) She shoulda broken up with Devon, first...and THEN kissed Josh... Gah... This is sad, because now Ronnie's gonna feel all bad about herself...and she's not going to give Josh a try because she feels so awful...
Ok, maybe not, but my mind likes to wander, and that's what i came up with...Lol. However, this is your story, so i'll let you take it where you want it to go... And hopefully that means they'll get together...soon. Heh. Kudos! Depressing chapter, but every good story has at least a few of those... Great job...:)
8/13/2003 c6 inconsequential me
Aw! Poor Devon! I hope he's back home...cheating. or something. That'd make things convenient for Ronnie. But what i've heard of him, he's not really the type... but you never know. heh.
i like how you switch POV's... you write from both males and females perspectives equally well...and that's impressive. or at least in my opinion you do...heh. it was an insanely amazingly written chapter... wonderful.
heh... such conflict. bad josh, bad. skanks are bad. boys should avoid them. heh. oh well. at least ronnie stopped him from doing something he...might...maybe...would...regret? or something like that.
THEY KISSED! How cute! (...poor devon...heh). can't wait to see what you ahve planned for the next chapter... hope you update soon. kudos!
Aw! Poor Devon! I hope he's back home...cheating. or something. That'd make things convenient for Ronnie. But what i've heard of him, he's not really the type... but you never know. heh.
i like how you switch POV's... you write from both males and females perspectives equally well...and that's impressive. or at least in my opinion you do...heh. it was an insanely amazingly written chapter... wonderful.
heh... such conflict. bad josh, bad. skanks are bad. boys should avoid them. heh. oh well. at least ronnie stopped him from doing something he...might...maybe...would...regret? or something like that.
THEY KISSED! How cute! (...poor devon...heh). can't wait to see what you ahve planned for the next chapter... hope you update soon. kudos!
8/10/2003 c6 2rosepetal
hey, sweet story. i liked it.as a matter of fact., i couldn't stop reading it. i mean, the last chapter was a little weird at the end, but u can't please everybody.
2rosepetalhey, sweet story. i liked it.as a matter of fact., i couldn't stop reading it. i mean, the last chapter was a little weird at the end, but u can't please everybody.
7/25/2003 c5 freelancewriter
its really cute...lol...he shaved his head for her...aw.write more!
its really cute...lol...he shaved his head for her...aw.write more!
6/17/2003 c5 1Freakage
Interesting, and I really agree on the whole poser issue. And I always thought that no one understood what I was talking about! Wow. I'm impressed. Great story, and you definitely deserve more reviews!
1FreakageInteresting, and I really agree on the whole poser issue. And I always thought that no one understood what I was talking about! Wow. I'm impressed. Great story, and you definitely deserve more reviews!
6/10/2003 c5 2inconsequential me
Whoo! I don't care what you say...THis chapter was excellent! And so was the last! i love how she was...relatively up front to him, just spoke her mind. It says a lot about her personality. maybe she was a bit too forward, but eh... It works.
ANd look! he actually LISTENED to her! Wow, i'm surprised he actually changed that much... But that indicates taht he definitely takes her very very seriously...So i'm intrigued! Whoo! Excellent story you have on your hands, and I'm waiting for an update, k? This is goin under my fav's list...Kudos!
2inconsequential meWhoo! I don't care what you say...THis chapter was excellent! And so was the last! i love how she was...relatively up front to him, just spoke her mind. It says a lot about her personality. maybe she was a bit too forward, but eh... It works.
ANd look! he actually LISTENED to her! Wow, i'm surprised he actually changed that much... But that indicates taht he definitely takes her very very seriously...So i'm intrigued! Whoo! Excellent story you have on your hands, and I'm waiting for an update, k? This is goin under my fav's list...Kudos!
6/6/2003 c3 2inconsequential me
Whoo! I'm afraid I love this Joshua boy much more than Devon... He's just so...Real. Haha. So great. I love him. Lol. I love how they can keep a conversation going off of basically nothing (did that make any sense?) And the dialouge was priceless... I love her "week of shame" that showed some thought... and i feel bad for devon. heh, i know i dont' love him as much as josh, but still...
Oh, and this is random, but i really liked the canadian bit-that was amusing.
Welp, kudos! I know its been awhile sinc eyou last updated but...think about doing it again? Yes? please...? For me? Hah. excellent job.
2inconsequential meWhoo! I'm afraid I love this Joshua boy much more than Devon... He's just so...Real. Haha. So great. I love him. Lol. I love how they can keep a conversation going off of basically nothing (did that make any sense?) And the dialouge was priceless... I love her "week of shame" that showed some thought... and i feel bad for devon. heh, i know i dont' love him as much as josh, but still...
Oh, and this is random, but i really liked the canadian bit-that was amusing.
Welp, kudos! I know its been awhile sinc eyou last updated but...think about doing it again? Yes? please...? For me? Hah. excellent job.
3/16/2003 c2 inconsequential me
Aww...Wow. I'm really liking the beginning. Devon sounded so adorable, I'm sad to see Veronica just might have some new options. Lol. We'll see...
It's a promising beginning, I enjoyed reading it. It flowed together nicely, i'm really curious as to see what you have in mind. So...Update soon, por favor! That would be magnificent... Kudos! XP
Aww...Wow. I'm really liking the beginning. Devon sounded so adorable, I'm sad to see Veronica just might have some new options. Lol. We'll see...
It's a promising beginning, I enjoyed reading it. It flowed together nicely, i'm really curious as to see what you have in mind. So...Update soon, por favor! That would be magnificent... Kudos! XP