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8/10/2003 c1 Pigwidgin
Wow, I really liked this one.

Great short! really.

Very morbid and again you're really good with the analogies.

It really doesn't need anymore!


Take Care,

2/22/2003 c1 Some Reader
This is off to a good start. However, some minor editing should be done - where is not quite the same as were. Mistakes like those confuse the reader, but can be easily overcame.

Anyway, this does sound pretty good, and I hope you post more!
2/21/2003 c1 23girloz14
I love how your writing is so descriptive. It's like you're right there.

I'd love to see you continue this, and if you do, please email me.

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