for Doll8/10/2003 c1 Pigwidgin
Wow, I really liked this one.
Great short! really.
Very morbid and again you're really good with the analogies.
It really doesn't need anymore!
Lovely.
Take Care,
~Pigwidgin~
Wow, I really liked this one.
Great short! really.
Very morbid and again you're really good with the analogies.
It really doesn't need anymore!
Lovely.
Take Care,
~Pigwidgin~
2/22/2003 c1 Some Reader
This is off to a good start. However, some minor editing should be done - where is not quite the same as were. Mistakes like those confuse the reader, but can be easily overcame.
Anyway, this does sound pretty good, and I hope you post more!
This is off to a good start. However, some minor editing should be done - where is not quite the same as were. Mistakes like those confuse the reader, but can be easily overcame.
Anyway, this does sound pretty good, and I hope you post more!
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