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7/24/2003 c1 7Amaelamada
Hey, it's me! Ok, enough about me-about this poem: I'm not quite sure who "that little kid" at the end of the poem is, but except for that, this is really great. *applauds* You said what you wanted to say how you wanted to say it. Cool. *nods*
7/3/2003 c1 2TokyoGal90
wow...Thats REALLY good! I'ts the best poem I'v read on here! For real! I love how your talkin about how people arn't so great and stuff. GREAT job!
6/23/2003 c1 141Suicidal Butterfly
okay sorry. I reviewed. I just stopped reading at a certain point. Sorry. I feel realy guilty I couldn't return the favour. But after returning reviews today with all the fucking porno poetry I have had to review. You know. I'm just not in the mood to read this kind of suff (
6/17/2003 c1 12Spanish Amor
kinda funny, but sometimes you may find yourself doin the things you been writing about.
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
you speak the truth! great job!
5/31/2003 c1 blahblahblahblahblah
Kewh! I like the way you're comparing people with life as well as loneliness. I liked it ^_^
5/17/2003 c1 9Sarina Fannel
Story of my life you've written. We've a lot in common. You write with a lot of emotion by the way. it seeps through every word and gives your writeing a sort of life and is often hard for many to attain, myself included.
5/16/2003 c1 4DaughterofDeath
sounds alittle like my life
3/25/2003 c1 36unexplainedmuse
this just sent chills down my spine man.

i know..im a dork.

i like the way you think.

the more i read of your stuff makes me see how much potential you have.

potential for what exactly, i dont know.

its hard to put into words, but ill try.

basically there are 3 kinds of people.

the people who are total idiots.

the people who are just normal and live their life

and then theres the people who see things for the way they truly are and why theyre like it.

philosophers. basically.

bet ya never told anyone this, but you are a philosopher, like me.

probably why i like reading your stuff so much.

just remember...in times when it seems hopeless and nothing can go right,.

all of the great people in this world who amounted to great things went through the same shit.

a group of moths will hate a lone butterfly for her color,

theyll outcast her for her beauty.

but the butterfly remains with them

not realizing that shes above them.

anyone can see by looking, that shes above them,

but the moths remain ignorant of the fact because of their own insecurities.

pathetic stab at wisdom...

i hope ya understand it, i can be prety confusing at times.
3/16/2003 c1 33CoolGetsCold
It was good... I hate people. Sometimes.

Keept it up. :)

Love,

Malaika
3/14/2003 c1 KristyGrace19
Poetry is a good way to release your feelings and just let the words flow - I can tell that poetry really helps you to do that and show your true emotions. This was a well-written poem, even if it doesn't apply to everyone - I can almost picture what you're saying and how true it may be in some areas.

KEEP WRITING!

~Kristen
3/9/2003 c1 37Isthischaos
Again, well written and SO true! I can picture the scene, I mean - it's what happens every day, isn't it? There's nothing more to say, other than don't you dare stop writing!

Yours,

Angel x.x.x
2/24/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
You did describe a majority of people. But don't forget that there are those that are different. By the way, I'm also going to be in the graduating class of 2005! We rock!

~Heart of the Sword

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