for If only I were to have a pair of wings5/16/2003 c1 
38Shadafakup
Its beautiful.. Wow.. I liked it man.. You made me wish I had wings too.. Wonderfully written.. I liked it a lot..
38ShadafakupIts beautiful.. Wow.. I liked it man.. You made me wish I had wings too.. Wonderfully written.. I liked it a lot..
5/10/2003 c1 210Kelpylion
I really like this poem. You captured the longing feeling very well. Very nice rhyme structure
210KelpylionI really like this poem. You captured the longing feeling very well. Very nice rhyme structure
5/6/2003 c1 44ELR07
This was beautiful so much better than anything else I have ever read... do you know who emily dickinson is? ... you remind me of her .
email me sometime at
ps thanks for reading my poems
44ELR07This was beautiful so much better than anything else I have ever read... do you know who emily dickinson is? ... you remind me of her .
email me sometime at
ps thanks for reading my poems
5/6/2003 c1 212VOIDKing Ki
Hm, like a deep pain or fear you hold inside. You want to escape but just cannot. It's sad to read this, but it was very well done. Keep writing!
212VOIDKing KiHm, like a deep pain or fear you hold inside. You want to escape but just cannot. It's sad to read this, but it was very well done. Keep writing!
5/5/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
cool piece! i like it a lot. i wish i could fly away so free like a bird. you did a good job on this! keep on writing!
36obsidian katanacool piece! i like it a lot. i wish i could fly away so free like a bird. you did a good job on this! keep on writing!
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
yes yes so true! i love your thoughts! more people should think like you and write like you, too! wish i could. ^_^
124Penumbrayes yes so true! i love your thoughts! more people should think like you and write like you, too! wish i could. ^_^
3/15/2003 c1 64not sure yet
beautiful, i love the flow in the this and the imagry as well, both are very pretty and the last line of the poem i think says a lot, and sticks, which i think is key to a good poem, excellent poem
64not sure yetbeautiful, i love the flow in the this and the imagry as well, both are very pretty and the last line of the poem i think says a lot, and sticks, which i think is key to a good poem, excellent poem