10/16/2007 c6 1Demeterr
Oo this is interesting. Look forward to see how it turns out.

6/27/2007 c6 SM Michaels
I'm new to this story, but I like what I've read. I looked at your profile to see the status of this story and I see that you're rewriting it. I have no problem w/ that whatsoever, even though I must tell you, the first six chapters are VERY well written. Then characters are great, plot: pretty good, and impecable grammar.

Please update as soon as you finish rewriting b/c I would love to keep on reading your story!

5/31/2007 c1 4l. fayette
there are some typos and the syntax is relatively simple, but overall i think you have a good idea going here. however, i just think that your main character is a touch cliche: outcast, likes to read, etc. idk, you find that formula so often...so, good times

2/21/2007 c1 28HeartbreakersHorizon
This is by far the best story that i've read in my entire life. Well, second anyways, the first one is Addicted to You by anonymous reality. You might like it, but if you've already read then, ignore this. If you hate, then that is your opinion.

9/12/2006 c6 Sarah
YES! I'm sorry I didn't notice it sooner, but work and school have been keeping me busy. I love the rework but I would also love a copy of the original. My old bribes still apply if you update reletively soon.

7/20/2006 c5 SassyGrl
Hey! First off, I am pretty interested to read the previous version of this story so if you could email that to me, I'd appreciate it. My email is , thanks! OKAY on to the actual review! This story is pretty addicting! You are really good with the descriptions. I really like CALLEN! I can't wait to read about what she's gonna have to do to become the Princess of Theieves. SO at least we KNOW that she becomes the Princess of Thieves from your summary. Anyways, I was wondering if you could take a look at my new story and tell me what you think of it. I'd appreciate it! So Update soon please!

7/10/2006 c1 4Love is a Ring Toss Game
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