for My Angel, My Treasure9/10/2012 c3 KaronePrincess
Please, pretty please would you update the next chapter? I love all the details you described your characters. I already liked the story and would love to read more into it. Great writing! Keep it coming. Thanks! Please, I'm begging you, update more!
Please, pretty please would you update the next chapter? I love all the details you described your characters. I already liked the story and would love to read more into it. Great writing! Keep it coming. Thanks! Please, I'm begging you, update more!
3/3/2004 c1 
9OracleVortex
I love the depths that you put into your character development, despite the fact that you chose to present it to us before the chapters...
I haven't been on this site in months! I just checked my reviews and stuff, and realized that you probably thought I was shunning you or something. -_-;; So sorry about that! I'd love to chat/talk to you too! I looked for your email, but I don't think I see it anywhere... Drop me a line, all right?
I'd love to hear from you!
9OracleVortexI love the depths that you put into your character development, despite the fact that you chose to present it to us before the chapters...
I haven't been on this site in months! I just checked my reviews and stuff, and realized that you probably thought I was shunning you or something. -_-;; So sorry about that! I'd love to chat/talk to you too! I looked for your email, but I don't think I see it anywhere... Drop me a line, all right?
I'd love to hear from you!
4/19/2003 c3 5kriz-te
very very interesting! poor luke. got his voice taken. i dont like peter already. about who to shine...i pick...that you pick...it makes more sense that you would know what to tell us when! personally tho, i am very interested in the whole odin owin and ryna maya parts as well. of course, i like luke very much so go on about him as much as you want! just keep writing!
5kriz-tevery very interesting! poor luke. got his voice taken. i dont like peter already. about who to shine...i pick...that you pick...it makes more sense that you would know what to tell us when! personally tho, i am very interested in the whole odin owin and ryna maya parts as well. of course, i like luke very much so go on about him as much as you want! just keep writing!
4/13/2003 c2 kriz-te
hey, write more soon. this race is very creative. i like it alot. especially how the world has three levels and i like how they are related to each other. im a little confused on names. do the dragons in the people have their own names? and do all plant...(forgot how to spell it) do they all have dragons in them? just a little fuzzy on what the dragons have to do with anything. anyway, its really good and im looking forward to more!
hey, write more soon. this race is very creative. i like it alot. especially how the world has three levels and i like how they are related to each other. im a little confused on names. do the dragons in the people have their own names? and do all plant...(forgot how to spell it) do they all have dragons in them? just a little fuzzy on what the dragons have to do with anything. anyway, its really good and im looking forward to more!
4/13/2003 c2 Ankle
very very good
very very good