
8/11/2003 c4
7Dark Hamadryad
There's gonna be more, right? Please tell me there's going to be more!
~Luna

There's gonna be more, right? Please tell me there's going to be more!
~Luna
8/11/2003 c2 Dark Hamadryad
Really good. Shows that taking a leap of faith can be very risky and yet rewarding.
~Luna
Really good. Shows that taking a leap of faith can be very risky and yet rewarding.
~Luna
6/10/2003 c4 lostinscotland
what have you done? you didn't kill him, did you? why are they jumping off whatever they're jumping off? what's going on? ::runs away and cries:: now i'm all scared...poor sean!
what have you done? you didn't kill him, did you? why are they jumping off whatever they're jumping off? what's going on? ::runs away and cries:: now i'm all scared...poor sean!
6/9/2003 c1 lisa
it was really good
it was really good
5/23/2003 c4
12Silverlight Elf
Poor Sean! My friend's name is SEAN! AND YOU KILLED HIM! YOU KILLED HIM! haha! I REALLY love this poem, or.. whatever it is, its kinda like a small story in its own! Its awusme, my favorite work that you have done.

Poor Sean! My friend's name is SEAN! AND YOU KILLED HIM! YOU KILLED HIM! haha! I REALLY love this poem, or.. whatever it is, its kinda like a small story in its own! Its awusme, my favorite work that you have done.
5/7/2003 c3 Princess Mulan
NO! cliff hanger!
O_O
I feel like I'm jumping down myself
very good work
NO! cliff hanger!
O_O
I feel like I'm jumping down myself
very good work
5/6/2003 c3
1Jimmy Jazz
OHH! Cliffhanger! No! Great poems again, but... cliffhanger! Wa. Great cliffhanger, but... wa.

OHH! Cliffhanger! No! Great poems again, but... cliffhanger! Wa. Great cliffhanger, but... wa.
5/5/2003 c3 David Maxwell
I Hate Being Negative, But I Don't Like This One As Much As Part 2.
Still Good Anyway.
Sal Should Become The Best Poem Writer In The World Though.
I Hate Being Negative, But I Don't Like This One As Much As Part 2.
Still Good Anyway.
Sal Should Become The Best Poem Writer In The World Though.
5/5/2003 c2 David Maxwell
Even at listening to music at full blast, the second part of this poem makes the room u are in silent as you read it.
Amazing!
Even at listening to music at full blast, the second part of this poem makes the room u are in silent as you read it.
Amazing!
5/5/2003 c1 David Maxwell
This is a really good poem.
I Liked How The Poem Rhymed So Well.
Well Done Sally!
David
This is a really good poem.
I Liked How The Poem Rhymed So Well.
Well Done Sally!
David
4/15/2003 c2
68Princess Mulan
Amazing!
What a rush! I feel andreline rushing to my brain.
This is the best! Wonderful!
I love the image, I feel like I'm jumping down myself.

Amazing!
What a rush! I feel andreline rushing to my brain.
This is the best! Wonderful!
I love the image, I feel like I'm jumping down myself.
4/15/2003 c1 Princess Mulan
Ho lovely is this!
So brave, and strong and totally amazing!
The determination is admirable. Great job!
Ho lovely is this!
So brave, and strong and totally amazing!
The determination is admirable. Great job!
4/1/2003 c1
98Not Just a Little Girl
This is one of my favourites, and i think its one of your best :D

This is one of my favourites, and i think its one of your best :D