for Eradicate the Unknown!2/2/2007 c1 runningrunning
This is an awesome satire piece. You just made my day.
This is an awesome satire piece. You just made my day.
5/28/2006 c1 Vivica
nicely written =) freakishly accurate.
nicely written =) freakishly accurate.
3/2/2006 c1 
3King Patch
Whoo!
You're American, right? Thanks for proving to me (European) that you lot aren't ALL absolutely mad. Thanks for being able to make fun of your country -perhaps there is hope for the USA yet, but in that case they'd better make sure you and the other normal people don't defect to another continent :)
3King PatchWhoo!
You're American, right? Thanks for proving to me (European) that you lot aren't ALL absolutely mad. Thanks for being able to make fun of your country -perhaps there is hope for the USA yet, but in that case they'd better make sure you and the other normal people don't defect to another continent :)
4/23/2005 c1 47Kira of Hecale
if you ever somehow publish this, the reviews should go with it. they make it even funnier.
47Kira of Hecaleif you ever somehow publish this, the reviews should go with it. they make it even funnier.
8/7/2004 c1 hmmm
even though this is under parody..i dun think this is a topic that should have ever been made fun of...its a serious matter and i dont think it is funni at all...a lot of lives are lost and destoryed...and this piece of writing does not much to help matters... the worst thing is... there are ppl who think like this...
its like making fun of retards to sumone who has a sibling or friend who has a mental disability...not very nice aye...
i dunderstand this writing does noe reflect any of your thoughts but...your writing does effect many people
even though this is under parody..i dun think this is a topic that should have ever been made fun of...its a serious matter and i dont think it is funni at all...a lot of lives are lost and destoryed...and this piece of writing does not much to help matters... the worst thing is... there are ppl who think like this...
its like making fun of retards to sumone who has a sibling or friend who has a mental disability...not very nice aye...
i dunderstand this writing does noe reflect any of your thoughts but...your writing does effect many people
1/9/2004 c1 1Mercy Pity Peace and Love
I think you should try and write a satire about people who don't understand satire.
Very good essay.
1Mercy Pity Peace and LoveI think you should try and write a satire about people who don't understand satire.
Very good essay.
1/1/2004 c1 songsayer712
Haha. You could go into way more detail with this. Why stop at McDonalds and Disneyworld? Please, don't leave Walmart out the picture. And how about setting up a transplant community where are the token "White Trash" people can fit in? I am almost disappointed that it was so short.
Even so, it is nicely written; you have good word flow and an unforgiving, snappish wit. The "unwashed masses" comment almost slipped by me. Kudos to you and the satire!
Haha. You could go into way more detail with this. Why stop at McDonalds and Disneyworld? Please, don't leave Walmart out the picture. And how about setting up a transplant community where are the token "White Trash" people can fit in? I am almost disappointed that it was so short.
Even so, it is nicely written; you have good word flow and an unforgiving, snappish wit. The "unwashed masses" comment almost slipped by me. Kudos to you and the satire!
10/16/2003 c1 158outruntheavalanche
This reminds me of Jonathan Swift's A Modest Proposal.
Unlike some, I know what satire is! Yey for me!
158outruntheavalancheThis reminds me of Jonathan Swift's A Modest Proposal.
Unlike some, I know what satire is! Yey for me!
8/18/2003 c1 Dimmer than the Moon
Lol! That was great! I haven't found many good chances to laugh lately but this certainly got me going. I always seem to get a kick out of mocking Bush's plans (but what else are the elephants good for?) Good job. Write more essays like this. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
And to all you ignorant reviewers out there, a satirical opinion is NOT to be taken seriously. Lighten up and laugh a little. (And read the category name next time).
Lol! That was great! I haven't found many good chances to laugh lately but this certainly got me going. I always seem to get a kick out of mocking Bush's plans (but what else are the elephants good for?) Good job. Write more essays like this. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
And to all you ignorant reviewers out there, a satirical opinion is NOT to be taken seriously. Lighten up and laugh a little. (And read the category name next time).