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11/6/2006 c1 anich
very beautiful may i say

good day

anich
9/10/2006 c1 bipedalcooney
This is well written and you have a great focus; you make good points and I can relate. Your rhyming is very natural. Great work, I liked this a lot.
3/31/2006 c1 122Lady Padawan
I like how you suggest that "identity" is *fluid* in the last stanza. Boy or girl, man or woman, love knows no sex, age, or design. Gorgeous!

Princess S.
10/15/2005 c1 16LynaX
Quite excellent and I love it! ;-D
7/18/2005 c1 Skylar Rose
I'm glad to see you found what makes you happy! What a strong piece! And you rhyme so naturally! Great, great work!

~Skylar Rose
3/4/2005 c1 Clap Clap Raise Your Hands
Interesting, good poem, some lines didn't read all that well... I liked the lines, but the structure changed a lot, and sometimes it felt like there were words missing to make the lines a bit shorter which distracted me from the content... but from a second reading I do like this... have written some poems on a similar subjet, come and have a look see if when you have some time. keep writing x weasel within x
1/14/2005 c1 20Nanners
Nice poem. I like that it rhymes! ^_^ I love rhyming poetry.
11/19/2004 c1 6Boys For Sale
Nice poem! From your biography, it seems you are the same sort of guy that I feel like sometimes... I like how you are involved in your school.. I am the President of my GSA- it's so much fun. The world needs more people like you.
7/8/2004 c1 23sciwriter13
i love this poem. you are an excellent writer.
6/26/2004 c1 an ebony flame
Very impressive. Usually, I hate rhyming poems, but the rhyme in this one accurately enforces the theme.
5/2/2004 c1 83xLecta
Wow. That was. GREAT
bravo bravo
Beautiful wording, idea, format, powerful ending, it was wonderful.
12/13/2003 c1 5Daughter Of Liberty
I like it. It's very detailed and realistic. it even rhymes! it's awesome.
9/11/2003 c1 libras
The beginnig had kind odf a typical feel to it, but otherwise, it was a great poem (and I usually dont say this cuz I dont know much about poems).
8/28/2003 c1 2MonkeyAlien
Very nice.
6/18/2003 c1 greenfroggies
moving...beautiful. An amazing poem - so much emotion in it! Keep writing and i am glad you have found yourself.
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