for Author's Note3/5/2003 c4 
20Deadwind
I'd like to know what Arthur's idea was when he starting writing, because it seems a little odd of him to just pick up writing after rebelling against it for so long. But you're the author and you probably have some elaborate plan where he turns out to be a CIA agent or something! Lol, keep writing!
20DeadwindI'd like to know what Arthur's idea was when he starting writing, because it seems a little odd of him to just pick up writing after rebelling against it for so long. But you're the author and you probably have some elaborate plan where he turns out to be a CIA agent or something! Lol, keep writing!
3/2/2003 c3 Deadwind
Don't worry about the length of the chapter, you're the author! You can do whatever you want! Even take over the world!.I mean.no.shoot.
But anyways, for the title, I think Broken Pencils would sound cool for me.but out of your two choices, I think either one is okay!
Don't worry about the length of the chapter, you're the author! You can do whatever you want! Even take over the world!.I mean.no.shoot.
But anyways, for the title, I think Broken Pencils would sound cool for me.but out of your two choices, I think either one is okay!
3/1/2003 c2 20Deadwind
Oh! Now what's going to happen next? Is he going to keep on writing, or will he continue with his stance? I guess I'll have to wait to find out!
PS: Love the quote "I'm always writing. Just not on paper."
20DeadwindOh! Now what's going to happen next? Is he going to keep on writing, or will he continue with his stance? I guess I'll have to wait to find out!
PS: Love the quote "I'm always writing. Just not on paper."
2/25/2003 c1 Deadwind
I like the idea of this story, very original. Keep going with it as you please. However, there is one pet peeve I got. Right in the first paragraph you used the word "accept" instead of "except" and the second sentence is a fragment-either intentional or not-but it just doesn't stand out right. Sorry for the constructive critisism if you didn't want it, but I really do like the way you're going with this!
I like the idea of this story, very original. Keep going with it as you please. However, there is one pet peeve I got. Right in the first paragraph you used the word "accept" instead of "except" and the second sentence is a fragment-either intentional or not-but it just doesn't stand out right. Sorry for the constructive critisism if you didn't want it, but I really do like the way you're going with this!