for Walking among whispers12/6/2003 c8 Girl number 1
Hey
This was an awesome story totally worth my time. I liked chapter eight best though so I hope you'll have more scenes like that because it kind of was intense and all not to forget that it all started with something possesing Trent or what ever
Keep up the good work and update soon
GIRL NUMBER 1
Hey
This was an awesome story totally worth my time. I liked chapter eight best though so I hope you'll have more scenes like that because it kind of was intense and all not to forget that it all started with something possesing Trent or what ever
Keep up the good work and update soon
GIRL NUMBER 1
5/26/2003 c8 
7Vakril
way to go! very nice! i like. now lets see how they fare afterwards. and will elizabeth find out bout this? dun dun dun
7Vakrilway to go! very nice! i like. now lets see how they fare afterwards. and will elizabeth find out bout this? dun dun dun
5/12/2003 c7 Vakril
AWESOME! sounds great. cant wait to see what happens...lol. hm what will elizabeth think? lol. keep it coming. great story coming out.
AWESOME! sounds great. cant wait to see what happens...lol. hm what will elizabeth think? lol. keep it coming. great story coming out.
5/4/2003 c6 89Lyria Shard
Extremely interesting, I'm seriously enjoying this series. (by the way, are you jen?)
Lyria
(formerly Sal Maxwell, Princess of Light)
89Lyria ShardExtremely interesting, I'm seriously enjoying this series. (by the way, are you jen?)
Lyria
(formerly Sal Maxwell, Princess of Light)
5/3/2003 c6 7Vakril
kool. very interesting. i wonder what the point is of bringing hmi to the secret room...bum bum bum...lol. a pretty informative chapter and i still want more. keep up the writting and continue this story!
7Vakrilkool. very interesting. i wonder what the point is of bringing hmi to the secret room...bum bum bum...lol. a pretty informative chapter and i still want more. keep up the writting and continue this story!
5/2/2003 c5 Vakril
great story. gotta keep it going. of course there are a few little typing errors and some had me pausing for a little bit. but all in all that was a good story. keep it up
great story. gotta keep it going. of course there are a few little typing errors and some had me pausing for a little bit. but all in all that was a good story. keep it up
5/2/2003 c2 Vakril
hey tis mikey. i like this story. its really kool. plus giving me a lot of ideas too. lol. dont worry. this is a great story. cant wait to see what happens next. keep i up.
hey tis mikey. i like this story. its really kool. plus giving me a lot of ideas too. lol. dont worry. this is a great story. cant wait to see what happens next. keep i up.
3/2/2003 c1 cardboard tom
It's a shame you completely misunderstood the song of mine you reviewed. Then again, reading your little 'anti-poser' rant in your profile, I think there are a lot of things you've misunderstood.
It's a shame you completely misunderstood the song of mine you reviewed. Then again, reading your little 'anti-poser' rant in your profile, I think there are a lot of things you've misunderstood.
2/28/2003 c1 4trepidation
It seems a little too highschool-ish for me. If you didn't label everyone as a highschool clique it would be a little bit more believable but you say a 'jock' or a 'hot skater boy'. The people would be more dynamic if you wouldn't label them like that. It sounds kind of immature, but other than that it's pretty good
4trepidationIt seems a little too highschool-ish for me. If you didn't label everyone as a highschool clique it would be a little bit more believable but you say a 'jock' or a 'hot skater boy'. The people would be more dynamic if you wouldn't label them like that. It sounds kind of immature, but other than that it's pretty good
2/28/2003 c3 89Lyria Shard
Woah, thi bit was really scary, but your best so far. You keep switching between Trent and Tom though.
89Lyria ShardWoah, thi bit was really scary, but your best so far. You keep switching between Trent and Tom though.
2/28/2003 c2 Lyria Shard
This was really good. My only critiscism (sp) is please add more detail into your sentencing.
Sal
This was really good. My only critiscism (sp) is please add more detail into your sentencing.
Sal