3/18/2003 c1 8PaperLanterns
excellent! truly excellent. i especially like the middle part. "love can be a complex and demoralizing thing" great line! keep up the good work.
excellent! truly excellent. i especially like the middle part. "love can be a complex and demoralizing thing" great line! keep up the good work.
2/26/2003 c1 10The Lost Broken One
This is really good.and it describes my breakup with my ex. (which happened only a couple of days ago.).perfectly. Keep up the good work. You do good things, even if you don't rhyme.
This is really good.and it describes my breakup with my ex. (which happened only a couple of days ago.).perfectly. Keep up the good work. You do good things, even if you don't rhyme.