for I Said I'm Sorry8/1/2004 c20 anonymous
AH! YOU CRAZY WOMAN! SHE NEVER KNEW SHAWN WAS ON THE OTHER SIDE...WAIT...YEAH...SHE NEVER KNEW...AH! CRAZY WOMAN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT! WAH! okay...i'm gunna go read the sequel now...heh..too high...must lay off sugar..._
AH! YOU CRAZY WOMAN! SHE NEVER KNEW SHAWN WAS ON THE OTHER SIDE...WAIT...YEAH...SHE NEVER KNEW...AH! CRAZY WOMAN! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THAT! WAH! okay...i'm gunna go read the sequel now...heh..too high...must lay off sugar..._
7/4/2004 c20 
1Slightly Bent Halo
ok, so despite all my horrible negativity.. it wasn't that bad. and the ending was ok.. just gonna read the authors note thingy, but i hope u weren't too offended by my comments.. it wasn't terrible, i did manage to read it all.. i just thought it could do with some more realism...
1Slightly Bent Halook, so despite all my horrible negativity.. it wasn't that bad. and the ending was ok.. just gonna read the authors note thingy, but i hope u weren't too offended by my comments.. it wasn't terrible, i did manage to read it all.. i just thought it could do with some more realism...
7/4/2004 c19 Slightly Bent Halo
ok, so this chapter was actually ok.. more believable. i thought the fact that he drew her with puffy eyes was hilarious!
ok, so this chapter was actually ok.. more believable. i thought the fact that he drew her with puffy eyes was hilarious!
7/4/2004 c18 Slightly Bent Halo
ok, i'm gonna say it agin.. UNREALISTIC! i mean c'mon.. it's their two month... way too overboard in my opinion...
ok, i'm gonna say it agin.. UNREALISTIC! i mean c'mon.. it's their two month... way too overboard in my opinion...
7/4/2004 c17 Slightly Bent Halo
still finding it unrealistic.. i know i'm not really being that helpful.. but i am still reading so that counts for something right.. and i am improving ur review count... don't hate me! :(
still finding it unrealistic.. i know i'm not really being that helpful.. but i am still reading so that counts for something right.. and i am improving ur review count... don't hate me! :(
7/4/2004 c16 Slightly Bent Halo
ok so i feel bad coz i think i'm coming across as lil miss negative, but a candlelit dinner on the beach? blah...
ok so i feel bad coz i think i'm coming across as lil miss negative, but a candlelit dinner on the beach? blah...
7/4/2004 c15 Slightly Bent Halo
hm so i think the whole age thign is a problem coz i think they're acting about maybe 14, but they're supposed to be about 16.. actually maybe older coz in one chapter they could drive.. so i dunno.. i just think that's inconsistent
hm so i think the whole age thign is a problem coz i think they're acting about maybe 14, but they're supposed to be about 16.. actually maybe older coz in one chapter they could drive.. so i dunno.. i just think that's inconsistent
7/4/2004 c14 Slightly Bent Halo
hm, i don't really get alot of the stuff with this.. i guess i can't really relate..
hm, i don't really get alot of the stuff with this.. i guess i can't really relate..
7/4/2004 c11 Slightly Bent Halo
hm, the whole denial thing is ANNOYING ME! but i guess now they have kinda admitted it... oh, and i feel like i'm being really negative.. it's not that bad.. i am still reading it...
hm, the whole denial thing is ANNOYING ME! but i guess now they have kinda admitted it... oh, and i feel like i'm being really negative.. it's not that bad.. i am still reading it...
7/4/2004 c10 Slightly Bent Halo
why is he denying that he likes her.. i don't get it... i guess i can't really relate to this story much.. but i'm determined to read it all..
why is he denying that he likes her.. i don't get it... i guess i can't really relate to this story much.. but i'm determined to read it all..
7/4/2004 c8 Slightly Bent Halo
he likes her so he's hanging up on her? hmm, and i'm guessing she's in the book...
he likes her so he's hanging up on her? hmm, and i'm guessing she's in the book...
7/4/2004 c7 Slightly Bent Halo
ok, so i knwo it's fiction and doesn';t have to be realistic.. but i think the whole bitchy friendship thing is a bit immature if they're supposed to be about 16...
ok, so i knwo it's fiction and doesn';t have to be realistic.. but i think the whole bitchy friendship thing is a bit immature if they're supposed to be about 16...
7/4/2004 c5 Slightly Bent Halo
hmm, i'm just finding it all a little unrealistic.. like people don't normally open up that much, and be that honest so quickly.. well at least ii wouldn't! but that could be just me...
hmm, i'm just finding it all a little unrealistic.. like people don't normally open up that much, and be that honest so quickly.. well at least ii wouldn't! but that could be just me...