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3/28/2009 c1 138lael1bologna
This is exellent
1/11/2004 c1 28frugale
Nice, nice mythology reference!
10/26/2003 c1 31xyellx
Beautiful
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
oo! nice! I love horses and fantasy creatures!
5/30/2003 c1 Kyalia
Love mythological allusions... ^_^.
4/10/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
So beautifully described - A Haiku well written.

~DW
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
i hope i still have that child in me. love this lots!
3/20/2003 c1 14reveileb maerdyad
ooh, nice, nice, nice. ; ) one thing, though: i know my greek mythology, and yet i can't help wondering 'bout pegasus being a "messenger of love." i mean, the only part i've read of him was him being w/ bellerophon when he slayed that monster (was it the chimaera? can't remember), but i... heck, i overanalyze everything, don't i? ^_^;; oh well, the imagery was great, though. keep writing!
3/20/2003 c1 35aurias
Whoa1 Somebody riding on Pegasus! Very nice. :)
3/16/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Really good once again. I really enjoyed this one because of its truth. We all just want to be children forever...
3/15/2003 c1 64not sure yet
beautiful, seem to have a thing with haikus, never was really any good at them, something to be admired, excellent job
3/13/2003 c1 128Zainab
I love your haikus, and this is no exception! Nice imagery with this one!
3/9/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Cool! That Pegasus line was awesome!

~Heart of the Sword
3/5/2003 c1 9RacerX
This a haiku good job. :)
3/5/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
I must be one of the few who did understand this mainly cause I know who Pegasus is, lol. Anyway, another lovely haiku. Keep it up.~CT
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