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3/4/2003 c1 2www.yournamehere.com
o, I like it has a cool sound, and in your review to me you said kittens weren't your fav, well what is I'll write sometin^^
3/4/2003 c1 17Jade6
Oh. I like this. I am no good Haiku poetry and I am always impressed by people who can say so much with so little.

Jade
3/1/2003 c1 4Avatara
Nice haiku. Keep it up. Thanks for the review I'd like you to comment on it though as it was my first ever!
2/28/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
Beautiful!

I love Pegasus ^_^
2/28/2003 c1 16Cryptonym
Pretty cool. I liked the imagery of it, seeing the pegasus bursting from heaven. That's pretty cool. Keep up the writing.
2/28/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
nice haiku! i like it! keep writing! and thanks for the review!
2/28/2003 c1 Needa S
Not sure I understand this one is it a myth the messenger. Good job just the same.. Keep writing!
2/28/2003 c1 7whitesoul
ok continuation from my small scope of vocab.

who is pegasus?

i thought aphrodite was the god of love and pegasus was hercules punya kuda terbang?

yes i am a fan of hercules.gogogo kevin sorbo!

i know poems suppose to have a deep meaning

maybe i am too practical but some body keeps on writing about love.

hehhehehehe*hentai look on whitesoul's face*

anyways it is beautifully written keep it up ya.

[ donlar secretly write.share with me mah!]
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