for Twilight7/12/2005 c1 
13AsTheRainFalls
That was beautiful. Picturesque; I don't think I could have described it any better, but if I tried, those would be my feelings. Love it.
13AsTheRainFallsThat was beautiful. Picturesque; I don't think I could have described it any better, but if I tried, those would be my feelings. Love it.
3/25/2004 c1 24LanaLlama
This was amazing, particulary because it phrased questions I've always wanted to ask but never knew what to say. I like knowing that there's someone else out there who can put what I think into words...thanks.
24LanaLlamaThis was amazing, particulary because it phrased questions I've always wanted to ask but never knew what to say. I like knowing that there's someone else out there who can put what I think into words...thanks.
1/26/2004 c1 1Lauren K
I love the way you put in the colors with the thoughts and questions. This is honestly good.
~kiara
I read your review on...I forget the poem...that critisizes Bush for not being "Christian" enough and you said "tolerance...oh the horror!" or something. Hilarious! Religion's fine, but I dislike people that refuse to accept that someone can be a good person if they believe something different. Go you!
1Lauren KI love the way you put in the colors with the thoughts and questions. This is honestly good.
~kiara
I read your review on...I forget the poem...that critisizes Bush for not being "Christian" enough and you said "tolerance...oh the horror!" or something. Hilarious! Religion's fine, but I dislike people that refuse to accept that someone can be a good person if they believe something different. Go you!
9/23/2003 c1 21tawnyfawn
nice. kp. up the excellent work.
if you have time please check out some of my writingsand review.
21tawnyfawnnice. kp. up the excellent work.
if you have time please check out some of my writingsand review.
9/7/2003 c1 32aulliana
For some reason, I nearly cried reading this. I've thought about some of those things at sunset before. I love the way this sounds like it's probably in the exact same order that the thoughts occurred naturally in your head. It makes the reader want to wonder, too.
32aullianaFor some reason, I nearly cried reading this. I've thought about some of those things at sunset before. I love the way this sounds like it's probably in the exact same order that the thoughts occurred naturally in your head. It makes the reader want to wonder, too.
6/26/2003 c1 14Jiasa Stormcloud
This was very interesting to read, and it has this lovely, stream-of-consciousness flow. I like the poetic prose form that you've used, and the thoughts you express here are things that run through my mind a lot, too. Very good points brought up, and in an effective manner. No real advice. ^^ Sorry I'm not being useful . . . Anyway, I like it much!
14Jiasa StormcloudThis was very interesting to read, and it has this lovely, stream-of-consciousness flow. I like the poetic prose form that you've used, and the thoughts you express here are things that run through my mind a lot, too. Very good points brought up, and in an effective manner. No real advice. ^^ Sorry I'm not being useful . . . Anyway, I like it much!
6/21/2003 c1 5U2LoVeR
Wow. Just wow. This is so amazing. I wish I could write like this.
"Was it more beautiful back before cars and brick houses and nicely paved streets? I envy the people who could sit and watch the sunset and see nothing but green land and beautiful sky."
I could not have put it any better. Great job.
5U2LoVeRWow. Just wow. This is so amazing. I wish I could write like this.
"Was it more beautiful back before cars and brick houses and nicely paved streets? I envy the people who could sit and watch the sunset and see nothing but green land and beautiful sky."
I could not have put it any better. Great job.
6/2/2003 c1 37eew
~ Beautiful burst of emotions. True and very touching. You've brought questions to mind that often exists in memories of children. I really love this. It will definitely go into my favorites...
c. butterfly~**
37eew~ Beautiful burst of emotions. True and very touching. You've brought questions to mind that often exists in memories of children. I really love this. It will definitely go into my favorites...
c. butterfly~**
5/24/2003 c1 8Selene Silverwing
I'm reading through your stuff because i've become a fan of yours to say the least...
Very nice description and very moving... I really liked this peice.
8Selene SilverwingI'm reading through your stuff because i've become a fan of yours to say the least...
Very nice description and very moving... I really liked this peice.
4/27/2003 c1 10indigogecko
I've done some work offline in similar style. I have to say I rarely get the chance to sit and watch the sun go down, but when I do, I take that chance because I think it is one of the most beautiful sights in the world. Sunrise can be pretty spectacular too though. Especially from the top of Mount Kilimanjaro, with all the colours bouncing off the glacial crater...
10indigogeckoI've done some work offline in similar style. I have to say I rarely get the chance to sit and watch the sun go down, but when I do, I take that chance because I think it is one of the most beautiful sights in the world. Sunrise can be pretty spectacular too though. Especially from the top of Mount Kilimanjaro, with all the colours bouncing off the glacial crater...
3/15/2003 c1 5Spirit Lovelorn
That was pretty deep. I like the stream of conscious form of writing. Some of the best writing comes from that. I think this is going under "Favorite Stories".
~Liz
5Spirit LovelornThat was pretty deep. I like the stream of conscious form of writing. Some of the best writing comes from that. I think this is going under "Favorite Stories".
~Liz
3/1/2003 c1 27Loganberry
"Am I still a child, to believe so fervently in what can not be?" I hope so; I hope that, in some ways at least, we all remain children. You do have a gift for imagery.
27Loganberry"Am I still a child, to believe so fervently in what can not be?" I hope so; I hope that, in some ways at least, we all remain children. You do have a gift for imagery.