for The Game II6/27/2003 c12 Dark Auro
hey i hope u update soon i read ur story itz wickid i noe i sound so like a dork wellz ne wayz hope ya continue ur story bye latez
hey i hope u update soon i read ur story itz wickid i noe i sound so like a dork wellz ne wayz hope ya continue ur story bye latez
6/26/2003 c12 sarah
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
6/24/2003 c12 Michelle
I like how Raina and Normrak finally got some action. haha, I liked that part, but I dont like how she's fighting with the head. Why isnt normrak saving her? You need more parts of normrak and raina 'together' haha. Update fast!
I like how Raina and Normrak finally got some action. haha, I liked that part, but I dont like how she's fighting with the head. Why isnt normrak saving her? You need more parts of normrak and raina 'together' haha. Update fast!
6/24/2003 c12 Kiesa
Update soon!
Update soon!
6/23/2003 c12 Tiara
Great story!
Great story!
6/23/2003 c12 Tiffany23
Great chapter! congrats for making 100 pages! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Great chapter! congrats for making 100 pages! Can't wait for the next chapter.
6/23/2003 c12 NightBlossom
hey i liked this chapter! I was wonderin when there was gonna be some "tension" between Raina and Normrak. So, when are they gonna hop on the good foot and do the bad thing, hm? itz only a matter of time...*evil giggle*. Wait, u get to have Normrak in a box under ur bed? NOT FAIR! ok, yea, u created him, but still! Can't we work something out, something similar to joint custody or something? *puppy face*
hey i liked this chapter! I was wonderin when there was gonna be some "tension" between Raina and Normrak. So, when are they gonna hop on the good foot and do the bad thing, hm? itz only a matter of time...*evil giggle*. Wait, u get to have Normrak in a box under ur bed? NOT FAIR! ok, yea, u created him, but still! Can't we work something out, something similar to joint custody or something? *puppy face*
6/23/2003 c12 flying blind
awesome story, congrats on making a 100 pages.
no i dont think you should delete this chapter, its a good chapter, Normrak showed emotions =)
update soon, i cant wait to read more
awesome story, congrats on making a 100 pages.
no i dont think you should delete this chapter, its a good chapter, Normrak showed emotions =)
update soon, i cant wait to read more
6/22/2003 c12 ski1118
Oh... a lovey dovey moment between Normrak and Raina. Hehehehehe. And it was much needed, much, much needed. I was starting to doubt he really felt anything for her and was just messing with her head. But why oh why does the child seem to have a sense for these moments and interrupt! It just infuriates me. I was like, 'Yes! They're finally getting somewhere!' And then Feral walks in and I'm like 'Damn it no!' Lol, oh well. But I expect more in the future! And why do you hate this chapter? I loved it. Got some insight on Normrak's past, had the intimate moment going... it was a great chapter! Loved it! Made my day! Lol. Anyway, yeah I couldn't even get on this site yesterday, it was being a pain in the butt. But I'm so tired right now, I must sleep. Glad you updated, although I should hurt you for leaving such a cliffhanger, it's just not fair. Grr... oh well. I can wait, you're much better at updating than I am. Lol. :o)
Oh... a lovey dovey moment between Normrak and Raina. Hehehehehe. And it was much needed, much, much needed. I was starting to doubt he really felt anything for her and was just messing with her head. But why oh why does the child seem to have a sense for these moments and interrupt! It just infuriates me. I was like, 'Yes! They're finally getting somewhere!' And then Feral walks in and I'm like 'Damn it no!' Lol, oh well. But I expect more in the future! And why do you hate this chapter? I loved it. Got some insight on Normrak's past, had the intimate moment going... it was a great chapter! Loved it! Made my day! Lol. Anyway, yeah I couldn't even get on this site yesterday, it was being a pain in the butt. But I'm so tired right now, I must sleep. Glad you updated, although I should hurt you for leaving such a cliffhanger, it's just not fair. Grr... oh well. I can wait, you're much better at updating than I am. Lol. :o)
6/22/2003 c12 Iris
Hey now, no deleting is allowed...lol. I actually liked this chapter (there were a few repetition of things, um, like the repetition of Raina getting stronger and faster, but it's not a big deal.). It was actually interesting to see Raina and Normrak get really close and I think it's about time they do even if they don't go all the way, as one of my friends likes to put it. Anyway, I sure hope the Head doesn't end up killing people and I'm so glad to hear that the story might go on for a little longer. *does happy dance* I can't wait for the next chapter now. So, update soon and let's hope Normrak doesn't remain stubborn for too long. :)
Hey now, no deleting is allowed...lol. I actually liked this chapter (there were a few repetition of things, um, like the repetition of Raina getting stronger and faster, but it's not a big deal.). It was actually interesting to see Raina and Normrak get really close and I think it's about time they do even if they don't go all the way, as one of my friends likes to put it. Anyway, I sure hope the Head doesn't end up killing people and I'm so glad to hear that the story might go on for a little longer. *does happy dance* I can't wait for the next chapter now. So, update soon and let's hope Normrak doesn't remain stubborn for too long. :)
6/22/2003 c12 
32Cryptic Insanity
This chapter Didn't stick in terms of writing, but I don't want the head to kill anyone, because then someone dies!
And when the hell are you gonna reveal who that girl whom died is?
32Cryptic InsanityThis chapter Didn't stick in terms of writing, but I don't want the head to kill anyone, because then someone dies!
And when the hell are you gonna reveal who that girl whom died is?
6/22/2003 c11 tricklingdust
Oh dear, the Head is beginning to irritate me. Then again, so is Normrak's stubborn attitude about his feelings.
Oh dear, the Head is beginning to irritate me. Then again, so is Normrak's stubborn attitude about his feelings.
6/20/2003 c11 1NightBlossom
l0l! in response to ur comment, i'm sure u did enjoy jumping on his back. how was it? is he all muscles? *cough*, neway, I liked this chapter too. Confrontation between father and son. Bitter feelings resurface. Etc. all goodiness!
1NightBlossoml0l! in response to ur comment, i'm sure u did enjoy jumping on his back. how was it? is he all muscles? *cough*, neway, I liked this chapter too. Confrontation between father and son. Bitter feelings resurface. Etc. all goodiness!