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7/7/2020 c1 Otakuami
So sexy so Hot. My lusty senses are tingling a little lol
7/31/2012 c1 nffhkasjfnbsdkjb
I. Love. This. Could feeel the anticipation. Perfect.

Suki
1/14/2007 c1 iwanttodeletethiswtf
wow that was really good i loved it

A.R.-MistressELEMENT
11/22/2006 c1 8failte200
THAT'S more like it! :)

What is it with you and "second person"...

Damn. I want a boyfriend now. I imagine my wife would object, though.
9/29/2006 c1 13neurotic ca
I really like the structure of this and minimalist style to this. Your word choices are beautiful and the ending is very satisfying. Great job. :)
6/12/2006 c1 3Modern Actide
N-aw.

That was cute.
5/21/2006 c1 3Wings of Fenrir
awz and you have a differnt writing stlye than most
8/30/2005 c1 rodeoclown
Beautiful and intense. You do a really good job of getting across Jaisyn's feelings of nervousness and anticipation. This story seemed very real to me.
2/27/2005 c1 2Sabe
M... Very nice. ^^;
12/5/2004 c1 LadyLynx
I love stories written like this. In that point of view, they're awesome, as is this.
9/6/2003 c1 1FamousOneLiners
sweet, completely sweet

and hopeless
8/23/2003 c1 11Anoyo
The second person has a nice sort of melodrama to it. The characters are specified, but, once again, you can really associate it with anyone. The names felt like a sort of add-in. That had a nice vibe to it. The personification of sex was a little new, too. Keep up the great work.

Ann

(And I do that too; using the same character names more than once. . .my friends get a bit annoyed w/ that. . .)
6/28/2003 c1 Cheyenne
I'm automatically in love with this. You're going on my faves.
6/27/2003 c1 2LoveSasa
Really, really good. I read this where you posted it in a community on livejournal, but the silly thing wouldn't allow me to comment. Anyways, I most certainly enjoyed it.

~Mizery Rose~
4/12/2003 c1 6Jennifer L. Rawles
awsome and is underground part 2 of this?
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