for Love Is11/29/2003 c1 
4Akarane
I like... Though I think your formatting is a bit off- I think that if you put the last sentence ("Love leaves") on it's own line, then it would make a bit more sense.
I really like the way the wotrds flow, and your description of "Love". The similie is different- I like.
Also, I think that if you made it so that anyone could review you would get more reviews, I almost didn't review because I was feeling lazy and didn't want to sign on... heh heh ^-^
Always till the end,
Anrui
4AkaraneI like... Though I think your formatting is a bit off- I think that if you put the last sentence ("Love leaves") on it's own line, then it would make a bit more sense.
I really like the way the wotrds flow, and your description of "Love". The similie is different- I like.
Also, I think that if you made it so that anyone could review you would get more reviews, I almost didn't review because I was feeling lazy and didn't want to sign on... heh heh ^-^
Always till the end,
Anrui