for Traveling Love9/5/2006 c16 
1clear vision
what the fuck is this? i'm sorry, but this is way fucking unreal. TOO unreal. this is crap. i am seriously going to stop reading this. probably like 2 or 3 chapters in to this, i was like to myself, "when the hell is this going to end?"
Look, if you can't take my critisism, then you shouldn't be writing. Seriously.
1clear visionwhat the fuck is this? i'm sorry, but this is way fucking unreal. TOO unreal. this is crap. i am seriously going to stop reading this. probably like 2 or 3 chapters in to this, i was like to myself, "when the hell is this going to end?"
Look, if you can't take my critisism, then you shouldn't be writing. Seriously.
9/4/2006 c4 clear vision
dude, i think you went a little over the top with the "i love you's" seriously, they've barely been in each other's presence for less than 24 hours!
dude, i think you went a little over the top with the "i love you's" seriously, they've barely been in each other's presence for less than 24 hours!
2/7/2005 c16 annonymous
fake as fuck fake as fuck fake as fuck fake as fuck. fake
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fake as fuck fake as fuck fake as fuck fake as fuck. fake
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6/21/2004 c18 Jenn
Get ready. You asked what I think should be in the sequel. Well here goes.
I think that Alex should come back and kidnapp her and beat her and rape her. Then I think that david should somehow be involved in all of it and then Anna doesn't think that she should forgive him once again, so, well, I hope you like my idea.
Get ready. You asked what I think should be in the sequel. Well here goes.
I think that Alex should come back and kidnapp her and beat her and rape her. Then I think that david should somehow be involved in all of it and then Anna doesn't think that she should forgive him once again, so, well, I hope you like my idea.
6/21/2004 c12 bitch
u bitch! that sucked that it was david but, well, it is a damn good story except for the fact that THE FUCKING CHAPTERS ARE SO FUCKING SHORT!
u bitch! that sucked that it was david but, well, it is a damn good story except for the fact that THE FUCKING CHAPTERS ARE SO FUCKING SHORT!
8/10/2003 c3 TheReviewSovereign
This was cheap. It sounded good, but it's short chapters with long paragraphs. 4.96 outta 10.00 tenticles.
This was cheap. It sounded good, but it's short chapters with long paragraphs. 4.96 outta 10.00 tenticles.
6/14/2003 c16 8Stallioness
HA HA I did say 991! That is really really stupid! I'm okay, moving on!
AUTHOR OF THIS STORY
8StallionessHA HA I did say 991! That is really really stupid! I'm okay, moving on!
AUTHOR OF THIS STORY
6/9/2003 c18 Angelica
That was one of the most confusing things i have ever read in my entire life. The plot made no sense whatsoever.
That was one of the most confusing things i have ever read in my entire life. The plot made no sense whatsoever.
6/4/2003 c16 Kenya
Hehe. I feel kinda bad for laughing at this chapter! But when u said:
Josh ran back into the circle "991 has been called and we have clean towels, water is on the way."
I started laughing sO hard! 991! lmao! I'm sry but it was hilarious! Good chappie! *giggle*
Hehe. I feel kinda bad for laughing at this chapter! But when u said:
Josh ran back into the circle "991 has been called and we have clean towels, water is on the way."
I started laughing sO hard! 991! lmao! I'm sry but it was hilarious! Good chappie! *giggle*