3/13/2003 c5 Amez
My god, I have read some shit in my time, but that has got to be the worst thing I ever read. You're a good writer but the content is SHITE. The main character is total hoe and has no self respect. . .jesus, that was so bad I nearly threw up!
My god, I have read some shit in my time, but that has got to be the worst thing I ever read. You're a good writer but the content is SHITE. The main character is total hoe and has no self respect. . .jesus, that was so bad I nearly threw up!
3/11/2003 c5 jelly bean20
me likey, keep writing. but wuts wit david? will he be introduced in a l8r chapter? ok, well, keep writing!
~maggerz
me likey, keep writing. but wuts wit david? will he be introduced in a l8r chapter? ok, well, keep writing!
~maggerz
3/8/2003 c5 Killing-Fantasy
wait what will happen to that boy staring at anna, u know the one off the boarding scholl guy?
wait what will happen to that boy staring at anna, u know the one off the boarding scholl guy?
3/7/2003 c5 3v33
Hey, thanx for the shout out! lol Nice chapter good story. =) Well, ttyl. dream_angel
Hey, thanx for the shout out! lol Nice chapter good story. =) Well, ttyl. dream_angel
3/7/2003 c5 YouKnowWhoIAm
Iw!
Too detailed. Very detailed. Yuck. "Traveling Love," they made love! It didn't go antwhere, sicko.
JediKid
ps.
I'll read the rest if you want me to 'cuz im your friend. *sigh, yet puke*
Iw!
Too detailed. Very detailed. Yuck. "Traveling Love," they made love! It didn't go antwhere, sicko.
JediKid
ps.
I'll read the rest if you want me to 'cuz im your friend. *sigh, yet puke*
3/5/2003 c1 dreamangel
Hi, it's me again.UPDATE! I don't want to be rude.sorry.just update please. =)
Hi, it's me again.UPDATE! I don't want to be rude.sorry.just update please. =)
3/4/2003 c2 5acegrl101
hey, its mel, i want more than 5+6 asap
i also need you to came and help
nice dicription
hey, its mel, i want more than 5+6 asap
i also need you to came and help
nice dicription
3/2/2003 c1 acegrl101
Keep writen girlfrin,, i want more NOW!
Please Please Pretty Please
YOU KNOW WHO DIS IS
Keep writen girlfrin,, i want more NOW!
Please Please Pretty Please
YOU KNOW WHO DIS IS
3/2/2003 c4 3v33
Very good, keep writing please! I have u under my favorite authors list. U can't really tell that this is your first story, because its very well detailed and written. =)
Very good, keep writing please! I have u under my favorite authors list. U can't really tell that this is your first story, because its very well detailed and written. =)
3/1/2003 c1 56Blue SunriZe
Go start so far. Continue soon. Meanwhile did you think you can come and review some of my stories/poems?
Go start so far. Continue soon. Meanwhile did you think you can come and review some of my stories/poems?