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11/28/2000 c1 41Willum
Not bad. A little predictable towards the end, but not bad. Would have liked some insight into what it is, but hey, that's part of the mystery.
11/28/2000 c1 Evasive
Whoa...man, I have never read anything so chilling! Even other physchotic stories don't match up to this one. The way you described the monster, the spelling at the end was scary too for some reason. The death, it was so gruesome! I wish that you'd make a sequel, you know, to give your audience a little hope that the thing can be defeated? Still, I'd like to know, what does it judge you on? And you could work on a little spelling, but other than that, I say, sequel it baby! Stories like that are what I live for! That was just really good! I would love to see a lot more of your work!
11/28/2000 c1 Tracy
EEEEE! That sent chills up my spine! Very good story.
11/28/2000 c1 clara200
creepy story I love twisted endings.

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