for This Very Moment3/9/2003 c8 tesuka- chan
whoa. did i miss anything there? *scratches head* that was like, a year passed. huh? *am confused* i thought he was leaving after a couple of days. And I also presumed that Serena would be able to straighten things up in not more than a month. *scratches head again* Oh well.
I guess what i was trying to say was that it suddenly became fast. Well, besides that, story's turning out fine, and character development is okay. You update fast, that's for sure. ^_^ Well, keep it up! And I hope you clear things up a bit. laterz! ^_^
whoa. did i miss anything there? *scratches head* that was like, a year passed. huh? *am confused* i thought he was leaving after a couple of days. And I also presumed that Serena would be able to straighten things up in not more than a month. *scratches head again* Oh well.
I guess what i was trying to say was that it suddenly became fast. Well, besides that, story's turning out fine, and character development is okay. You update fast, that's for sure. ^_^ Well, keep it up! And I hope you clear things up a bit. laterz! ^_^
3/8/2003 c8 wishinstar
and the plot thickens.
and the plot thickens.
3/7/2003 c5 Ab
Wow, this is really really really good. I look forward to reading the rest. ^_^
Wow, this is really really really good. I look forward to reading the rest. ^_^
3/3/2003 c2 
29Solange Atira
I like what I see lots. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens to Serena. The story has lots of potential.
29Solange AtiraI like what I see lots. Keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens to Serena. The story has lots of potential.
3/3/2003 c2 tesuka- chan
Gah! suspense! ~_~
Well, This caught my eye 'coz it reminded me of my classmate who was, and still is, gaga over a young guy teacher. I'm from an all- girl's school after all. ;P Well, this is damned interesting, i'll give you that. heehee. Well, hope you udpate soon! laterz! ^_^
Gah! suspense! ~_~
Well, This caught my eye 'coz it reminded me of my classmate who was, and still is, gaga over a young guy teacher. I'm from an all- girl's school after all. ;P Well, this is damned interesting, i'll give you that. heehee. Well, hope you udpate soon! laterz! ^_^
3/2/2003 c2 legalize it
Good stuff. I really have no complaints.your descriptions are well uh descriptive(blame public schooling) which is a good thing.um i really enjoy reading this so uh continue..yeah um thats all.
Good stuff. I really have no complaints.your descriptions are well uh descriptive(blame public schooling) which is a good thing.um i really enjoy reading this so uh continue..yeah um thats all.