for This Very Moment2/10/2004 c3 
169Siberia82
You have a great story going so far. I can't wait to read more (unfortunately, school's in the way *grumbles*). Wow, there are so many things that are happening all at once; I wonder how you're going to resolve everything. Oh, and I laughed at the line, "It wasn’t like he was a bad thing to look at." Hee hee hee! Attractive teachers are always a fascinating topic, although Vida seems really cold and strange.
What I find a little shocking is how did this guy earn his PhD at age 24? Is he a genius or something? Where I live, most people obtain their Bachelor's degree at age 22, if not older! And there's still a Master's degree to complete before they can move on to a PhD!
P.S. I have a professor-related story called "Unravel", if you're curious. It would mean a lot to me if you could at least check out the first chapter. Please? :)
169Siberia82You have a great story going so far. I can't wait to read more (unfortunately, school's in the way *grumbles*). Wow, there are so many things that are happening all at once; I wonder how you're going to resolve everything. Oh, and I laughed at the line, "It wasn’t like he was a bad thing to look at." Hee hee hee! Attractive teachers are always a fascinating topic, although Vida seems really cold and strange.
What I find a little shocking is how did this guy earn his PhD at age 24? Is he a genius or something? Where I live, most people obtain their Bachelor's degree at age 22, if not older! And there's still a Master's degree to complete before they can move on to a PhD!
P.S. I have a professor-related story called "Unravel", if you're curious. It would mean a lot to me if you could at least check out the first chapter. Please? :)
12/16/2003 c43 bumblebee-tuna
holy shit, this is so incredible. i dont get weepy over stories. i dont consider myself to be a particularly "emotional" person. but this story had me in near tears. you're an awesome writer.
the ending tho! gorsh, the ending! not to say i wish you'd changed it. it wouldnt have been the same story without the ending, but...man! it was so sad! anyways tho:D awesome, stupendous, incredible, amazing, and all those other synonyms for fucking great. im off to search for more of your works:D buh-bye
holy shit, this is so incredible. i dont get weepy over stories. i dont consider myself to be a particularly "emotional" person. but this story had me in near tears. you're an awesome writer.
the ending tho! gorsh, the ending! not to say i wish you'd changed it. it wouldnt have been the same story without the ending, but...man! it was so sad! anyways tho:D awesome, stupendous, incredible, amazing, and all those other synonyms for fucking great. im off to search for more of your works:D buh-bye
11/11/2003 c43 2Etheral suicide
oh my god...your a geinus...
This stroy is kinda like my grandma's.
But she ended up marrieing and giving birth to 6 living(1 stillborn) children.
My grandpa was her biology teacher 10 years older then her. The story is very cool...but why couldn't they be happy? it worked for my grandparents in the 40's
2Etheral suicideoh my god...your a geinus...
This stroy is kinda like my grandma's.
But she ended up marrieing and giving birth to 6 living(1 stillborn) children.
My grandpa was her biology teacher 10 years older then her. The story is very cool...but why couldn't they be happy? it worked for my grandparents in the 40's
10/27/2003 c43 karui
Well done... can you write an aleternate ending for all us sappy romance fans out here? :)
Well done... can you write an aleternate ending for all us sappy romance fans out here? :)
9/26/2003 c43 25suicidel angel
i'm not going to deny that i hate the ending, but the story was fabuous! i can usually never stay to a story, but yeah somehow the ending was really depressing (maybe coz i;m depressed!)
25suicidel angeli'm not going to deny that i hate the ending, but the story was fabuous! i can usually never stay to a story, but yeah somehow the ending was really depressing (maybe coz i;m depressed!)
7/13/2003 c43 Panther2k
Sniff. Unbreak My Heart say you love me again, i just wanted to say that song ran through my head as i read the finishing chapters. Thank you for the increadiable (i know i spelt it wrong) story. I think you acheived the desired effect to the readers as i was on the edge of crying. I will conclude this review saying, this story must come very close to your heart as your note suggests that you had a true love that left for you...
Sniff. Unbreak My Heart say you love me again, i just wanted to say that song ran through my head as i read the finishing chapters. Thank you for the increadiable (i know i spelt it wrong) story. I think you acheived the desired effect to the readers as i was on the edge of crying. I will conclude this review saying, this story must come very close to your heart as your note suggests that you had a true love that left for you...
7/6/2003 c43 12saicho-18
oh gods. thank you so very much for writing a teacher/student affair. there are hardly any good ones these days. anyways, great work on this story.. haven't read the sequel yet, but be sure that i will.. maybe next week. kudos to you and i hope the sequel will have a happy ending..
saicho_18 : slytherin ^-^
12saicho-18oh gods. thank you so very much for writing a teacher/student affair. there are hardly any good ones these days. anyways, great work on this story.. haven't read the sequel yet, but be sure that i will.. maybe next week. kudos to you and i hope the sequel will have a happy ending..
saicho_18 : slytherin ^-^
6/25/2003 c43 Luna Llena
OhMyGod i don't think i've ever cried so much with a story. It realy touch my heart and gave me a new site about the things around me.
You are a wonderful writter. and i'm realy hoping for a sequal on the subjet, that maybe "someday" may actualy come soon .
Luna LLena. =^.^=
OOh and while i was reading this story i was listening to a song that just stuck with it. the name is: 10,0Miles By: Mary Chapin Carpenter.
OhMyGod i don't think i've ever cried so much with a story. It realy touch my heart and gave me a new site about the things around me.
You are a wonderful writter. and i'm realy hoping for a sequal on the subjet, that maybe "someday" may actualy come soon .
Luna LLena. =^.^=
OOh and while i was reading this story i was listening to a song that just stuck with it. the name is: 10,0Miles By: Mary Chapin Carpenter.
6/24/2003 c43 cindy
it's a great story... too bad for the sad ending but i guess that's the way it would have ended if it was read.. great language used throughtout.. it made me cry n i was touched by their love, so strong n pure.. it's a great story..i don think i'll ever forget it
it's a great story... too bad for the sad ending but i guess that's the way it would have ended if it was read.. great language used throughtout.. it made me cry n i was touched by their love, so strong n pure.. it's a great story..i don think i'll ever forget it
6/24/2003 c43 cindy
it's a great story... too bad for the sad ending but i guess that's the way it would have ended if it was read.. great language used throughtout.. it made me cry n i was touched by their love, so strong n pure.. it's a great story..i don think i'll ever forget it
it's a great story... too bad for the sad ending but i guess that's the way it would have ended if it was read.. great language used throughtout.. it made me cry n i was touched by their love, so strong n pure.. it's a great story..i don think i'll ever forget it
6/18/2003 c43 30quietdrama22
This story was one of the best ones that I have read. You combined the emotions perfectly, and you made me feel like I was in the story. The story also had a realistic ending, the poems/songs were good, and you also proved that sacrificing love is not romantic but something that has to be done. I am just speechless
Anyways, you have a talent, keep writing.
: )
30quietdrama22This story was one of the best ones that I have read. You combined the emotions perfectly, and you made me feel like I was in the story. The story also had a realistic ending, the poems/songs were good, and you also proved that sacrificing love is not romantic but something that has to be done. I am just speechless
Anyways, you have a talent, keep writing.
: )
6/17/2003 c43 28Yami Scribe
This story was wonderfly bitter but at times wonderfully sweet, and for once in my life a book got me to cry. don't stop writing, ever. you have a talent-a gift, write more because this story touched me deeply, more deeply than i belive anything i've ever read. Send this story to a pubilisher, do the world a favor and spred the new aged Roemo and Juilet that this Novel is.
Your fan
Democrat-Teen
28Yami ScribeThis story was wonderfly bitter but at times wonderfully sweet, and for once in my life a book got me to cry. don't stop writing, ever. you have a talent-a gift, write more because this story touched me deeply, more deeply than i belive anything i've ever read. Send this story to a pubilisher, do the world a favor and spred the new aged Roemo and Juilet that this Novel is.
Your fan
Democrat-Teen
6/16/2003 c43 Angel-of-The-Sea
Aw that was a cute story. It was well written . but you should have made them come together in the end
But all in all it was good
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Angel-of-The-Sea
Aw that was a cute story. It was well written . but you should have made them come together in the end
But all in all it was good
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Angel-of-The-Sea
6/12/2003 c43 2LenaeStarr
I've been reading this story for 2 days... and I would like to say WONDERFUL JOB! I basically cried like a little bitch. I'm usually don't take love stories... so close to my heart. IT makes me mad... but, when I read this... it was just like, "Wow!"
You are a very good writer. You are writing style and all the emotion you put in your writing is what I want. I always dreamed of writing something like this, but never thought I could do it. You (and other authors) have given me hope and I'm going to do my best.
Thank you and please... never stop writing.
2LenaeStarrI've been reading this story for 2 days... and I would like to say WONDERFUL JOB! I basically cried like a little bitch. I'm usually don't take love stories... so close to my heart. IT makes me mad... but, when I read this... it was just like, "Wow!"
You are a very good writer. You are writing style and all the emotion you put in your writing is what I want. I always dreamed of writing something like this, but never thought I could do it. You (and other authors) have given me hope and I'm going to do my best.
Thank you and please... never stop writing.
6/10/2003 c28 22All The Three Queens
Wow, this is really, really good! I didn't have time to read all of it yet, but I certainly plan on it!
22All The Three QueensWow, this is really, really good! I didn't have time to read all of it yet, but I certainly plan on it!