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9/5/2004 c1 41Willum
Very nice. I like your style, and flow, and how things played out.
A little more could have been revealed as to the nature of the creature(s), but it was not distracting from the story.
Looking forward to reading more of your "Tampa after Dark" stories now.
3/27/2003 c1 10Redundant Goddess
Heheheh, good twist at the end. I kinda knew it would be her, but then I wondered if it wasn't one of the goth girls. Very good story. Liked it alot. Is this going to be a series of shorts or just one? Anyway, I really liked it. Pies!
3/15/2003 c1 12restless-wandering
Than what happens! *waves fist* darned commercials! lol, j/k.

I like it so far. I'm a little confused about what exactly their "kind" is, but I expect that will all be explained in due time. :)
3/2/2003 c1 14Chris Creevy
that was strange but it was good

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