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7/19/2003 c1 36obsidian katana
yeah, i know how this feels. i feel it on saturday, when sometimes i actually get to sleep longer, and on weekdays. i mean who wants to wake up and go to school? anyway, nice job. i like it. keep it up!
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
cool work!
5/30/2003 c1 Kyalia
Nobody likes being woken up on Sunday- just be happy you've never had to stay in a house with a cousin who thinks he's Superman and jumps on beds yelling (I wrote a poem, too. "X-Ray Eyes" or something like that, I think...). Good poem.
4/10/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
Well, I don't share that same joy of being able to sleep with lights piercing through my eyelids. That probably explains this... *Pokes eye bags* Ugh!

~DW
4/5/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
ah, ja, that sounds familiar *g*

great one!

cio, hoellenwauwau
3/30/2003 c1 Surrealeyes
i feel all warm and cozy now... i really should go back to bed... (I guess that means your haiku is a SUCSESS, lol)
3/26/2003 c1 40AvaRicE
I LOVE haikus! They bloody rule!

Short, but sweet!

Keep on writing ;)
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
we're so alike on sundays! (actually for me this is like every day...which is very unconvenient on school days, lol) it's so cool that you conveyed my favorite thing to do so well in words! keep writing, please!
3/20/2003 c1 35aurias
Very true! I am totally like that! Good. Keep it up. :)
3/16/2003 c1 The Black Rider
Terrific haiku. Much better than mine is all I can say.
3/15/2003 c1 64not sure yet
o, i love this! heh, night people such as myself tend to not like waking up...like today, lmao, woke up at 130 pm, thats actually not that bad...ANYWAYZ, cute poem, short, lil piece of life, nicely done
3/13/2003 c1 128Zainab
ooh, very mystical and mysterious in a way, but very very good. I like it, keep it up!
3/11/2003 c1 18Author Unknown1
And my mind screams."Just five more minutes!" This is very good.
3/5/2003 c1 42Dream Angel
I know this feeling all too well. Sounds like a typical morning before school starts. Anyway, I really liked your haiku! It was very well written, something I could never do with a haiku. I hope you write more haiku soon!

-Dream Angel

P.S. Thank you so much for the review that you gave me for "In My Dream Tonight" a while ago. I really appreciated it! Thanks again!
3/5/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Yeah, someone else who knows how i feel like in the morning^^. Very nice poem. Keep it up and thanks for your review.~CT
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