for Dream7/11/2003 c1 tsuruchi
this is tsuruchi. to tired to log in, hey i hope you weren't thinking of your man (the beatle or the other one) when you wrote this. This is sadness madness
this is tsuruchi. to tired to log in, hey i hope you weren't thinking of your man (the beatle or the other one) when you wrote this. This is sadness madness
5/22/2003 c1 
31Modern Poet
I don't know, I just didn't see clearly what you were explaining-the dream, and the reality.
31Modern PoetI don't know, I just didn't see clearly what you were explaining-the dream, and the reality.
5/22/2003 c1 Kyalia
"I could be bound into a nutshell..." Nightmares aren't fun. And they're confusing. I like.
"I could be bound into a nutshell..." Nightmares aren't fun. And they're confusing. I like.
5/2/2003 c1 9Lonestar Sweetheart
I can totally relate. The poem is hopeless and desperate...almost tragic. It also has this creepy feel to it. Keep us in suspense!
9Lonestar SweetheartI can totally relate. The poem is hopeless and desperate...almost tragic. It also has this creepy feel to it. Keep us in suspense!
4/28/2003 c1 35triskaidekaphobia
Very powerful, and impressive. Makes an interesting point which I feel I can identify to in a way...
35triskaidekaphobiaVery powerful, and impressive. Makes an interesting point which I feel I can identify to in a way...
3/28/2003 c1 curiouzkatt
hmm... i ain't a good critic... anyways.. its a dun-dun-dun-dun sorta creepy poem
i like it.
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hmm... i ain't a good critic... anyways.. its a dun-dun-dun-dun sorta creepy poem
i like it.
=^-^=