9/15/2003 c2 150SpawnMeister666
Only word I can think of for this is
WOW!
Great stuff...cant wait for you to put the next chapter up!
Spawny
Only word I can think of for this is
WOW!
Great stuff...cant wait for you to put the next chapter up!
Spawny
6/7/2003 c2 6Gilee7
Pretty good story thus far. Doesn't seem like you're going to finish it though, that's kind of a bummer.
GREAT description! You do a very good job with that in all your stories.
"A Little Pain" is kind of a sucky name for a chapter.
What? That's the only thing I could think of to bitch about. Sry.
Good job though.
Pretty good story thus far. Doesn't seem like you're going to finish it though, that's kind of a bummer.
GREAT description! You do a very good job with that in all your stories.
"A Little Pain" is kind of a sucky name for a chapter.
What? That's the only thing I could think of to bitch about. Sry.
Good job though.
3/8/2003 c1 12Terra Tigra
This is really good. I can't wait to see where it goes.
I admit, it is similar to my own story, "Child's Eyes", but I can see the originality in this and know it is not a knock-off.
Your writing is perfect, as always. Great description and imagery.
Keep writing! I hope you post the rest soon ^.^
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-
This is really good. I can't wait to see where it goes.
I admit, it is similar to my own story, "Child's Eyes", but I can see the originality in this and know it is not a knock-off.
Your writing is perfect, as always. Great description and imagery.
Keep writing! I hope you post the rest soon ^.^
Arrivederci!
-Terra Tigra-