5/17/2003 c5 18Wrider
This is a very good story. I especially like Savoy, she's so mischivous. *grin* I can't wait to see how all of this links together! Update soon please!
This is a very good story. I especially like Savoy, she's so mischivous. *grin* I can't wait to see how all of this links together! Update soon please!
5/16/2003 c1 2LucidityAdvance
The thingybobber at the bottom says to critique you, and yet.. i can find nothing to critique you on lol. amazing story. love it so very much XD
The thingybobber at the bottom says to critique you, and yet.. i can find nothing to critique you on lol. amazing story. love it so very much XD
5/16/2003 c2 12Naamela
Agh! It's taking me a while to figure out the next chapter...if anyone wants a sneak preview, e-mail me ()
I'm making progress on reviewing everyone's stories! ^-^ I'm proud of myself...
Agh! It's taking me a while to figure out the next chapter...if anyone wants a sneak preview, e-mail me ()
I'm making progress on reviewing everyone's stories! ^-^ I'm proud of myself...
5/16/2003 c1 5Yaviewen
o... me like!((kinda strange, but then im really one to talk)) I'll read the next chappies and tell you more of what i think!
o... me like!((kinda strange, but then im really one to talk)) I'll read the next chappies and tell you more of what i think!
5/16/2003 c2 11Megx
Really great! I like the way the characters think, and the concept is really interesting. The style contributes greatly to the feel of the story, and it is well-written. Please write more!
And...uhm...would you please review me? I would like to hear what you have to say about my stories! Under my bio, one is Black Witch: Queen of Thieves, the other is The Staff of Killess. Thanks!
Really great! I like the way the characters think, and the concept is really interesting. The style contributes greatly to the feel of the story, and it is well-written. Please write more!
And...uhm...would you please review me? I would like to hear what you have to say about my stories! Under my bio, one is Black Witch: Queen of Thieves, the other is The Staff of Killess. Thanks!
5/16/2003 c5 4Plateado
Just finished the last chapter you have posted, and I must say that Sovay is my favourite character. She has the sarcasm and wit that I like in a character. Well, I hope you post sometime soon. Later!
Just finished the last chapter you have posted, and I must say that Sovay is my favourite character. She has the sarcasm and wit that I like in a character. Well, I hope you post sometime soon. Later!
5/15/2003 c5 3Lumaris
Great story! Excellent imagative characters & world! It is absolutely, and no more than that, AWESOME!
Okay, I'm gonna point out a few things, just for the heck of it:
(ONE) Grammar's excellent!
(TWO) It's explained in stupindous (spelled right?) detail.
(THREE) Greatest piece of fantasy bookwork since Harry Potter & Temple Hill!
(FOUR) How long does it take for you to write a chapter? By the way the story's written, it looks like a lot of work's been put into it, not to mention time.
(FIVE) I'm out of things to say...
(SIX) I don't know why I'm still counting...
(SEVEN) Countdown?
(EIGHT) I meant count-up!
(NINE) LoL!
(TEN) Welp, goodwork on yeh story, and hope you post another chapter soon. 'Bye! :-)
Great story! Excellent imagative characters & world! It is absolutely, and no more than that, AWESOME!
Okay, I'm gonna point out a few things, just for the heck of it:
(ONE) Grammar's excellent!
(TWO) It's explained in stupindous (spelled right?) detail.
(THREE) Greatest piece of fantasy bookwork since Harry Potter & Temple Hill!
(FOUR) How long does it take for you to write a chapter? By the way the story's written, it looks like a lot of work's been put into it, not to mention time.
(FIVE) I'm out of things to say...
(SIX) I don't know why I'm still counting...
(SEVEN) Countdown?
(EIGHT) I meant count-up!
(NINE) LoL!
(TEN) Welp, goodwork on yeh story, and hope you post another chapter soon. 'Bye! :-)
5/15/2003 c1 Tashma Topas
Good beginning.Very good.But make it um...a bit more interesting(sorry if I offended you).The rest is fine. I can't wait for the next chapter!Please continue!Please!
Good beginning.Very good.But make it um...a bit more interesting(sorry if I offended you).The rest is fine. I can't wait for the next chapter!Please continue!Please!
5/14/2003 c5 12Naamela
Yeah, you gotta love Sovay...and if you don't already, just wait until later chapters! She's so cool ^-^
If ya want a special sneak preview, or just if you're confused, e-mail me at
Sorry I'm taking a while reviewing your stories, my Internet dies every five minutes so it's a bit tough...
Tapadh leinbh (thanks!) for sticking with me, guys!
Yeah, you gotta love Sovay...and if you don't already, just wait until later chapters! She's so cool ^-^
If ya want a special sneak preview, or just if you're confused, e-mail me at
Sorry I'm taking a while reviewing your stories, my Internet dies every five minutes so it's a bit tough...
Tapadh leinbh (thanks!) for sticking with me, guys!
5/14/2003 c1 9Magentian
Whoa... I just have to wonder what you're building up to. You can almost make out what the italicized words say... it makes trying to read the stuff more tantalizing... but I really don't have anything to comment on yet, as most of the plot doesn't seem to come in quite yet... good style, though. (You must be busy! 22 people who have stories to be looked at... wow. I don't envy you. ^_^ No offense, it's nice that you return the favor of reading and reviewing.) See you later!
Whoa... I just have to wonder what you're building up to. You can almost make out what the italicized words say... it makes trying to read the stuff more tantalizing... but I really don't have anything to comment on yet, as most of the plot doesn't seem to come in quite yet... good style, though. (You must be busy! 22 people who have stories to be looked at... wow. I don't envy you. ^_^ No offense, it's nice that you return the favor of reading and reviewing.) See you later!
5/13/2003 c2 6Belle the Shadow-Cat
heh interesting storyline, i like it! And Saphra's an interesting character. And Tuvus he's on my bad side. "i'll kill you if you don't let me win.." sheesh tough customer
also i liked this passage:
Saphra?s idea of fun was a little bit strange.
I found myself nodding to it "a huh, very strange" lol
Keep going
-Belle the Shadow-cat
heh interesting storyline, i like it! And Saphra's an interesting character. And Tuvus he's on my bad side. "i'll kill you if you don't let me win.." sheesh tough customer
also i liked this passage:
Saphra?s idea of fun was a little bit strange.
I found myself nodding to it "a huh, very strange" lol
Keep going
-Belle the Shadow-cat
5/13/2003 c2 4Plateado
The story is very interesting so far. It leaves the reader wondering what's going on and what's going to happen. Good work!
The story is very interesting so far. It leaves the reader wondering what's going on and what's going to happen. Good work!
5/12/2003 c5 3The Rogue Knight
Excellent work. Everything is well described, the characters are very vivid; they are very realistic. Sovay's story is looking pretty cool. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
Excellent work. Everything is well described, the characters are very vivid; they are very realistic. Sovay's story is looking pretty cool. I can't wait to read more. Keep it up!
5/12/2003 c5 3korakane
a bit confusing, but hopefully it will make more sense as the story progresses very good though
a bit confusing, but hopefully it will make more sense as the story progresses very good though
5/11/2003 c5 23Silver Magiccraft
I like it. It seems to be a really good story. I just can't wait for the next few chapters to make sure...
Sayonara
~~Silv~~
I like it. It seems to be a really good story. I just can't wait for the next few chapters to make sure...
Sayonara
~~Silv~~