
9/16/2003 c11 I am Gone
This story is just fabulus.Now I rember why I have it under my favorite list.
This story is just fabulus.Now I rember why I have it under my favorite list.
5/16/2003 c11
8TDL
Interesting how he meets up with Delaney. And how sweet that he keeps a piece of hi shirt with Sen's blood on it, in a weird, sick kinda way. hehe.
Sorry I didn't read this long ago, got so much crap happening. I'm in so deep I think my eyes are going to turn brown. lol.
Anyway, good job and write the next story pronto! I want to know what my favorite character is up to. :D
Much love,
~Tabitha, The Mad Hatter

Interesting how he meets up with Delaney. And how sweet that he keeps a piece of hi shirt with Sen's blood on it, in a weird, sick kinda way. hehe.
Sorry I didn't read this long ago, got so much crap happening. I'm in so deep I think my eyes are going to turn brown. lol.
Anyway, good job and write the next story pronto! I want to know what my favorite character is up to. :D
Much love,
~Tabitha, The Mad Hatter
3/24/2003 c10 RainShadow2005
We sat in the back of the diner, speaking in low, paranoid tones for the next five hours. Well, she was speaking in low, paranoid tones. I did the same when replying to her, humoring her, but when I needed coffee, I sounded was a viking captain, ushering thousands into battle.
That was so funny! I've seen Lost Boys too and I didn't know anybody remembered it. My sister loves that movie. Anyways, this chapter explained a lot about how Dulaney acts when she meets up with Seren.
We sat in the back of the diner, speaking in low, paranoid tones for the next five hours. Well, she was speaking in low, paranoid tones. I did the same when replying to her, humoring her, but when I needed coffee, I sounded was a viking captain, ushering thousands into battle.
That was so funny! I've seen Lost Boys too and I didn't know anybody remembered it. My sister loves that movie. Anyways, this chapter explained a lot about how Dulaney acts when she meets up with Seren.
3/24/2003 c9 RainShadow2005
Sorry it's been so long between reveiws. I love this chapter. Very action packed, then it ended on a funny note. Great.
Sorry it's been so long between reveiws. I love this chapter. Very action packed, then it ended on a funny note. Great.
3/18/2003 c11
2Suntiki
I love your dialog. It flows so well, and each remark is as genuine and unique as the one before it.
Regroup and write more.
I miss you something awful, you know.
_KFO

I love your dialog. It flows so well, and each remark is as genuine and unique as the one before it.
Regroup and write more.
I miss you something awful, you know.
_KFO
3/18/2003 c9 Suntiki
Grins and thumbs up for you. That was better than Coleridge, bordering on Grisham, I think some of the blood from that scene just spilled out of my monitor and onto my lap.
I'll send you the dry-cleaning bill.
Truly an edge o' the seat chapter.
You can pay me later. ;)
Grins and thumbs up for you. That was better than Coleridge, bordering on Grisham, I think some of the blood from that scene just spilled out of my monitor and onto my lap.
I'll send you the dry-cleaning bill.
Truly an edge o' the seat chapter.
You can pay me later. ;)
3/16/2003 c11
3Lomewen
This whole thing explains a lot. Really good and I think that everyone who has read Wylderaven's work should read this and visa versa.

This whole thing explains a lot. Really good and I think that everyone who has read Wylderaven's work should read this and visa versa.
3/15/2003 c11
4Wylderaven
God, Random, honestly, I couldn't be happier with this story. It fits so perfectly. And it's so ... you know ... Jareth. *grin* Off to read smokes and mirrors. *doublegrin*

God, Random, honestly, I couldn't be happier with this story. It fits so perfectly. And it's so ... you know ... Jareth. *grin* Off to read smokes and mirrors. *doublegrin*
3/15/2003 c10 Wylderaven
You know, I can't wait to see if Jareth comes back, with Connor now all bad assing with Delaney, how Connor will take Jareth's torment from now on. ;)
You know, I can't wait to see if Jareth comes back, with Connor now all bad assing with Delaney, how Connor will take Jareth's torment from now on. ;)
3/15/2003 c9 Wylderaven
I haven't reviewed this chapter yet have I? I suck. I love Jareth's take on Delaney. It's VERY cool, and well...perfect. *grin*
I haven't reviewed this chapter yet have I? I suck. I love Jareth's take on Delaney. It's VERY cool, and well...perfect. *grin*
3/15/2003 c8
3Lomewen
Yay! Another good chapter. I'm out this weekend so I wouldn't expect any reviews from me. But I will read asap. Keep up the good work!

Yay! Another good chapter. I'm out this weekend so I wouldn't expect any reviews from me. But I will read asap. Keep up the good work!
3/14/2003 c8 RainShadow2005
Another cliffhanger! That's horrible of you. :) No, really. This was a great chapter. So, he's finally met Dulaney. Wow, I didn't think I'd ever see Jereth get down on his knee and cry. It was touching in a way. But now you've left us with another cliffhanger. *sigh* I guess I'll just have to wait.
Another cliffhanger! That's horrible of you. :) No, really. This was a great chapter. So, he's finally met Dulaney. Wow, I didn't think I'd ever see Jereth get down on his knee and cry. It was touching in a way. But now you've left us with another cliffhanger. *sigh* I guess I'll just have to wait.
3/14/2003 c7 Lomewen
Cliffhanger! Wow. These are really good chapters and it keeps me begging for more. Don't hurt your poor readers, update soon!
Cliffhanger! Wow. These are really good chapters and it keeps me begging for more. Don't hurt your poor readers, update soon!