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6/28/2003 c2 8A-wolf-called-Skya
hi! yes, i think that ch.2 sounds a bit better! i just skimmed through it, but it sounded better!

Ch.5 in The Untamed Unicorn is up, thanks for your last review in Call To The Sky too!well, see ya later! Rachel.
6/24/2003 c2 44Kerensky
Chap. 2 is good, I wish I could have read the first two before they were revised. Anyway, I hope to see more good stuff in future chapters.

*The blood of countless warriors is in me, and I will not disgrace my heritage because of my own mistakes*
6/24/2003 c1 Kerensky
Nice story so far, I like it. I prefer stories with creatures/animals talking instead of humans, they take more imagination and determination to write.

*The blood of countless warriors is in me, and I will not disgrace them with my own mistakes*
6/24/2003 c1 10FlamingSmileyFace
Oh, what a cute concept ^_^ I have a thing with elements too. Yay fire and leos :'D I'll continue reading, so keep up the good work!
6/23/2003 c2 2Taill
O..great revised chapter! I really like Dravidian's personality too ^_^ I love dragons, and it's nice to know there's one good one out there!

So, aren't manticores those half-human, half-lion things? I can't remember that stuff...
6/23/2003 c1 Taill
Heh-sorry I haven't gotten to review your story yet -_-'

Very nice and creative-I think I'm going to like Cytosine, she's a cool felida ^_^
6/22/2003 c10 Wildmage42
Excellent. Sorry it took me so long, I've been at camp for a while. This is the best story on this site that I've read so far. I can't wait to hear more.

P.S. The only reason I mentioned Blaze specifically is because I was confused at the time and thought they were three separate characters. I just picked one at random. Thought you might want to know.
6/21/2003 c3 DigiDayDreamer
Thank you for the revised chapter! ^_^

Yes, Silver and Luna seemed to be more developed now, in character that is.

Poor surprised Dragon, er, Dravidian. I'd be surprised too if a felida re-enacted the parting of the Red river. ^_^

Yes, the legends were more or less the same. But at least the conversation was a lot better. Yes, Gaia had an interesting sense of humor.

The only constructive criticism I have is to remove the parenthesis (Even Luna.). It sounds better without them. Trust me.

Well, hope to see your review when I will finally post my second chapter.

"True life is but a multitude of infinite meanings."

Spell ya later!
6/20/2003 c10 Hawk Mage
I'm back.

Starr: RUN. She was right. I like this please get a new chapter.

I like-

Starr: I like Cytosine.

I'll give ya Swedish Meatballs that I just made if ya let me talk. They're in the kitchen.

Star: Hee! *runs to kitchen*

*rolls eyes* Right. Well I like Dravidian. Write more.
6/20/2003 c7 Hawk Mage
I'M SORRY! I know I should have read this sooner.

Starr: Usually she reads peeps (who have an account) stories if they review on her stories.

I've been busy with these stories and my fics on fanfiction.net. This is good. THanks for pointing out my mistake too. Off to the next chapters.

Starr: Help!

*whispers* She's starting to like this. It's rare for her to like them. She'll talk if she likes them.
6/19/2003 c2 lostinscotland
ooh, fun. thanks for reviewing my story, by the way! i'll get back to this one once my eyes get all unblurry...staring at a computer screen just can't be healthy...

i like luna! he's fun. and silver. yep, yep. ok, i'm off
6/19/2003 c10 20Silence's Song
I like the Dijernik's chant. It sounds exactly like what I would expect cannibals to chant. It gave me goosebumps. The Dijerniks really freak me out. I guess it's their purple skin and white irises that scare me. I can just seem them in my mind *shudders*. Another exceptional chapter, as usual. Please update soon!
6/19/2003 c9 Silence's Song
Oh No! I just realized that I forgot to vote! Um... my fav. character's Dravidian, and my second fav.'s are Luna and Silver. The Dijernik are going to give me nightmares.lol You described them very well! Great Chapter!
6/19/2003 c8 Silence's Song
Aw...Dravidian's so sweet! He really cares for Cytosine! I found one tiny mistake in this chapter. You wrote: "your wings just dislocated". It should be "wing's", since the "wing is". Don't worry, I do that all of the time! Poor Dravidian probably has a big headache from running into that tree. I laughed out loud when I read that. Poor dragon!
6/19/2003 c7 Silence's Song
I really like this chapter! The characters you introduced in this chapter are very well developed and seem almost real. The philosophy in this chapter is awesome too. Where do you find all of your quotes? Thank you for all of your reviews!
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