for A Simple Twist Of Fate6/14/2003 c9 
17VladimirsAngel
*chuckles* Oh, I love Dravidian. I have "bad breathing" days too - and have been known to get fits of coughing at the most inappropriate moments...
Oh and those lizard-things? *shudders* Ugh. Double ugh.
*grins* a sequal for Mir and Lupa? You're too kind. I may do that very thing...^_^
17VladimirsAngel*chuckles* Oh, I love Dravidian. I have "bad breathing" days too - and have been known to get fits of coughing at the most inappropriate moments...
Oh and those lizard-things? *shudders* Ugh. Double ugh.
*grins* a sequal for Mir and Lupa? You're too kind. I may do that very thing...^_^
6/13/2003 c7 3naughty little munchkin
hey! hm, i expected artemis to be a little more... arrogant and haughty... or did i just assume what's in the coccoon? lol! i liked that little lesson!
n e way, sorry to cut this review short... but i've gotta run! will read some more later!
lotsa luv, nadia
ps - interesting comment by cerberus after the group left them yesterday... i completely forgot about their markings! awaiting next chapter eagerly!
3naughty little munchkinhey! hm, i expected artemis to be a little more... arrogant and haughty... or did i just assume what's in the coccoon? lol! i liked that little lesson!
n e way, sorry to cut this review short... but i've gotta run! will read some more later!
lotsa luv, nadia
ps - interesting comment by cerberus after the group left them yesterday... i completely forgot about their markings! awaiting next chapter eagerly!
6/13/2003 c4 naughty little munchkin
hey there belle!
i'm back! i'm back! mid-years r over and i failed! yay! well, it gets worse everytime i think about it :)
n e way, enough of that.
I really liked this chapter :) i thought that Cerberus's accent was very well done and that he was a very interesting character! downright hilarious that is! lol! i luved him. oh, and i forgot to mention before that i think lunar and silver r so gorgeously funny! they are so cute! two of my favs :)
n e way, interesting information u've chosen to give u're dying readers here... more obstacles they'll hafta pass on their way to Mt Dragon... as well as something about a prophecy... what could it all mean!
ah well, am sure will find out eventually :) i read and wait with interest! good job!
lotsa luv, nadia :P
ps - thank u SO so much for all u're reviews! they mean SO much coming from an author of u're admirable talent!
hey there belle!
i'm back! i'm back! mid-years r over and i failed! yay! well, it gets worse everytime i think about it :)
n e way, enough of that.
I really liked this chapter :) i thought that Cerberus's accent was very well done and that he was a very interesting character! downright hilarious that is! lol! i luved him. oh, and i forgot to mention before that i think lunar and silver r so gorgeously funny! they are so cute! two of my favs :)
n e way, interesting information u've chosen to give u're dying readers here... more obstacles they'll hafta pass on their way to Mt Dragon... as well as something about a prophecy... what could it all mean!
ah well, am sure will find out eventually :) i read and wait with interest! good job!
lotsa luv, nadia :P
ps - thank u SO so much for all u're reviews! they mean SO much coming from an author of u're admirable talent!
6/10/2003 c9 38Fate Thirteen
OOh, cliffhanger indeed! Love Luna's thing with the pebbles and twigs - he's so funny! Silver must have infinite patience.
Update soon!
38Fate ThirteenOOh, cliffhanger indeed! Love Luna's thing with the pebbles and twigs - he's so funny! Silver must have infinite patience.
Update soon!
6/9/2003 c1 lostinscotland
great belin...you definitely have a unique style. at the beginning, it sounds almost as though you're talking to young children, you know? 'So that made them', 'Now this Felida', etc. nothing wrong with that, but certainly not something you see every day in stories.
ehh...so use more commas, watch for run-on sentences, that sort of thing. but this is an interesting story and i will try to come back and read more of it when i get a chance.
oh, and if you'd like to review one of my stories, that'd be great. i don't care which one, really...take your pick. and keep writing, writing rocks!
great belin...you definitely have a unique style. at the beginning, it sounds almost as though you're talking to young children, you know? 'So that made them', 'Now this Felida', etc. nothing wrong with that, but certainly not something you see every day in stories.
ehh...so use more commas, watch for run-on sentences, that sort of thing. but this is an interesting story and i will try to come back and read more of it when i get a chance.
oh, and if you'd like to review one of my stories, that'd be great. i don't care which one, really...take your pick. and keep writing, writing rocks!
6/9/2003 c8 Fate Thirteen
Love it so far. Favourite character is... um... Silver. Or Luna. Or actually both.
Will have to read the next chapter tomorrow, as am being kicked off computer - I will be back.
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Love it so far. Favourite character is... um... Silver. Or Luna. Or actually both.
Will have to read the next chapter tomorrow, as am being kicked off computer - I will be back.
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6/9/2003 c7 Fate Thirteen
Artemis is groovy. And Scout reminds me of somebody, but I can't remember who.
Just one thing - shouldn't it be 'You're NOT seeing the forest for the trees'? As in, you can't see the wood for the trees (what I know it as). Um, just wondering.
But this is dead cool. Love the juxtasposition (cor, long word) of human legends and mythology with this whole new felida culture. It's so cool!
Artemis is groovy. And Scout reminds me of somebody, but I can't remember who.
Just one thing - shouldn't it be 'You're NOT seeing the forest for the trees'? As in, you can't see the wood for the trees (what I know it as). Um, just wondering.
But this is dead cool. Love the juxtasposition (cor, long word) of human legends and mythology with this whole new felida culture. It's so cool!
6/9/2003 c6 Fate Thirteen
Damn, that's mean! You can't drop Cytosine in a river and then stop!
Right, Ain't nothing going to stop me reading the next chapter...
Damn, that's mean! You can't drop Cytosine in a river and then stop!
Right, Ain't nothing going to stop me reading the next chapter...
6/9/2003 c1 Fate Thirteen
I keep seeing your name on reviews to everybody, so curiousity has overcome me. So far, and this is only on the basis of the first chapter, I like it a lot. I'll review again when I've read more *gets comfortable in chair*.
*meep* Hate to sound like I'm scrounging, but I'd really like you to read my fic, Angelus. It has an anthro character in it!
Until the next review... 13
I keep seeing your name on reviews to everybody, so curiousity has overcome me. So far, and this is only on the basis of the first chapter, I like it a lot. I'll review again when I've read more *gets comfortable in chair*.
*meep* Hate to sound like I'm scrounging, but I'd really like you to read my fic, Angelus. It has an anthro character in it!
Until the next review... 13
6/8/2003 c3 3naughty little munchkin
hey! its me again! told u that i'd be back for more!
n e way, i thought it was very interesting the way u portrayed u're dragon character, Dravidian. I would never have expected the son the mighty clan to be at all friendly and curious. I also didn't expect Cytosine's quickness to take a liking to him! lol! but i must say, that u did it remarkably well! but in a few spots, mainly where they meet the dragon for the first time, it seemed just a tad... rushed. but yeah, that's the only criticism that i have to offer!
u have a nice descriptive style that agrees with me definitely! i REALLY really like this story and, unlike others, i see no harm in 'talking animal stories' (the word u used was too long and complicated for me to remember :) ) i think its very cute!
n e way, gotta keep going with u're story! i wanna know what's gonna happen! but i'll stop and review every few chapters ok?
keep up the good work!
lotsa luv, nadia
ps - i can't remember if i already did, but THANKS HEAPS for u're review on my story! it really meant a lot!
3naughty little munchkinhey! its me again! told u that i'd be back for more!
n e way, i thought it was very interesting the way u portrayed u're dragon character, Dravidian. I would never have expected the son the mighty clan to be at all friendly and curious. I also didn't expect Cytosine's quickness to take a liking to him! lol! but i must say, that u did it remarkably well! but in a few spots, mainly where they meet the dragon for the first time, it seemed just a tad... rushed. but yeah, that's the only criticism that i have to offer!
u have a nice descriptive style that agrees with me definitely! i REALLY really like this story and, unlike others, i see no harm in 'talking animal stories' (the word u used was too long and complicated for me to remember :) ) i think its very cute!
n e way, gotta keep going with u're story! i wanna know what's gonna happen! but i'll stop and review every few chapters ok?
keep up the good work!
lotsa luv, nadia
ps - i can't remember if i already did, but THANKS HEAPS for u're review on my story! it really meant a lot!
6/7/2003 c6 8A-wolf-called-Skya
last night i read more in your story, but was to lazy to do is review. so now i'm reviewing! ok...
1. spellcheck ALL your work. i find quite a few spelling mistakes in each chapter.
2. i thought this was a very funny mistake. i giggled a bit when i read it : "I'm okay?" Cytosine growled to Luna and Silver.
Fix that. thats the two things you really need to fix. keep writing !
Rachel Morgan.
P.S. ch.8 in my book is up, so if you wanna read, read! your gonna think i'm real mean!
8A-wolf-called-Skyalast night i read more in your story, but was to lazy to do is review. so now i'm reviewing! ok...
1. spellcheck ALL your work. i find quite a few spelling mistakes in each chapter.
2. i thought this was a very funny mistake. i giggled a bit when i read it : "I'm okay?" Cytosine growled to Luna and Silver.
Fix that. thats the two things you really need to fix. keep writing !
Rachel Morgan.
P.S. ch.8 in my book is up, so if you wanna read, read! your gonna think i'm real mean!
6/7/2003 c8 15La Bella Caracol
Great! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while; my boyfriend and I had our anniversary, then we had a fight, then we made up, and plus I had a lot of school work and I've just been really busy.
Now, my favorite characters are Flame, Ember, and Blaze. They're awesome! Scout is my least favorite...he is quite annoying. :P
-Riana Rogue
15La Bella CaracolGreat! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while; my boyfriend and I had our anniversary, then we had a fight, then we made up, and plus I had a lot of school work and I've just been really busy.
Now, my favorite characters are Flame, Ember, and Blaze. They're awesome! Scout is my least favorite...he is quite annoying. :P
-Riana Rogue
6/6/2003 c2 4shadowtalon
kewl ^_^ just a quick note: in your bio, you mention me as he. better add an 's' quick ^_~
4shadowtalonkewl ^_^ just a quick note: in your bio, you mention me as he. better add an 's' quick ^_~