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10/3/2003 c14 Hawk Mage
Hey! This is such a great story. I love it. It's definetly a favorite. I'm sorry for not posting a new chapter up on my fic. I don't have any time to really write it because I'm getting ideas for my Trials one and I didn't get any ideas till just now. I'll post and update it soon I promise. I'm glad you're making a sequal to this. This is a great story.
10/2/2003 c1 Oz Shadowskin
Hey Belle, I like this story! So Serena's a felida, right? I always liked how her flmes changed color with her emotions, that's cool. You also have some good words and descriptions in here.

Thanks for reviewing Smoke's story, glad you liked it. You were the one who originally gave me the idea to make him noble! (Though Smoke will refuse to admit it when he learns). Hope you keep with it, its fun to write.
9/22/2003 c13 2Kayasuri-n
Did I reveiw this chapter yet? No, I don't think so. Yeah. Belle-the-shadow-cat, sorry if I misspelled your name, my brain went south for the winter, do you know how to get it back?

Another thing, it's mean to leave someone hanging like that. Better send the eplog for me to beta read, quick! Maybe I'll get insperation. Who knows. Your a good writer. I can see movie offers flooding in, squashing everything in their path.
9/20/2003 c13 30Silverfire Starr
OH this is so good! I love how you slipped in the title "Yes, it's just a simple twist of fate."

Great job!


9/16/2003 c1 1aleppine
You have no idea how long I have been meaning to read and review this story.

It's a nice fat insight all at once into the past of Cyto, rather than unravelling the details out later. I like the ideas you've adopted into a feline lifestyle, and the metaphysical stuff too. The whole elements and time units thing. The idea of twins is cool. Dunno why, they just seem like they will be a memorable pair :D

Well, I did it! I got started! And from here, it's plain sailing to keep up, hehe ... only now I must go for sleepies .. be back in the morning ;)
9/14/2003 c13 8Kezkay
Closure, I need CLOSURE! *weeps and gnashes teeth* That can't be the end! I DEMAND you make a sequel! Please?

Aww, it was so nice how the clan accepted them in the end. Hehe, Silver, telling stories to the hatchlings, hahahaha, so cute. I like how you left Luna and the paitence bit to the imagination. I laugh whenever I think about what he was doing to Dravidar, MWA HA HA. -Kez
9/14/2003 c1 Kinryou
I don't feel like logging on under TerraMilleniumDragon...just in case you wanted to know who I am. Anyway, I love this beginning, and I plan on reading the other chapters. Poor Cytosine...if you ask me, she should go after the felidas that insulted her to her face. Not all dragons are bad... I must admit that I've slain demons, but never a felida...anyway, I had similar motivations to Cytosine. The demons had killed my kin. I've yearned for revenge against them, so I completely understand what she is going through. I hope she doesn't go on dragon-killing-sprees, though...

'Other Flames will be used for toasting marshmallows' hahaha! I like that line! If I put up a list of favorite quotes, it will be there.

Thank you for taking the time to read this very long review.

~Kinryou (Ryou) of the Darkness Flame
9/13/2003 c13 Alaurei

Ember: She is in shock. Dunno if she'll be able to review.

Adorell: ...I...can.

Ember: ! You talk?

Adorell: *nods* Hardly.

Ember: Wow! You'll review then. Let's hear it.

Adorell: . . . . . . . . . . . .

Ember: Er, I said let's hear it.

Adorell: . . . . . . . . . . . .

Ember: Come on you stupid bunny! Talk!

Adorell: *slashes Ember.*

Ember: *falls unconsious*

NC: Hey, that wasn't nice pal. Wait, what? Come again.


NC:Oh no wonder. Anyway, I'm out of my state of shock and it seems that Emberlye has fallen into it. That's quite alright though because it's time for me to review.


That was an amazing journey. Bravo and congradulations. I can't wait to hear from the half-last-chapter so I might be able to hear what happens. I couldn't predict a thing for the next plot though. *goes into deep thinking* Nope, still can't. Anyway, I loved this story. It was awesome. It was cute, funny, sorta romantic in ways (Don't we all wish for that romance?), exciting, adventurous, breath taking, heart throbing action, friendships and foes, songs and poems, the past present and future, dragons and cats and griffins and cerboruses (I spelt that wrong. I can't spell) and all sorts of animals. I could go on forever describing how great this story came out. I'm already dying for the next chapter. ^_^ I can't wait. Oh, and I'm curious now also. Are you possibly going to update your website due to the end of the story? Oh, and again, I was wondering if I could possibly do a final group picture of all of the characters. It just came to me near the end. I was inspired by you again! Man, authors these days are so...breath taking and inspiriring. Sheezsh.

Well, I'm loosing my voice today because I'm getting a cold so I must sadly cut this review short. And if I didn't, I bet I'd be typing about how I loved this story so much for the rest of my life. So, again, I loved it and it was one of the best ploted stories I've ever read! I'm going to create an award for you to put on your website. I can see it now. "Best Plot of 2003!"

Well, I love ya like a sis!

~~Nickel City

"To infinity, and beyond!"

Ember: What happened?...Where am I?

Adorell: *bonk*

Ember: Ack...er...oh...never mind...*falls unconsious again*
9/13/2003 c13 20Silence's Song
No...it can't be almost over! I'm going to go through withdrawal after the epilogue. Have I ever told you how much I've enjoyed "A Simple Twist of Fate"? Great job in writing it!
9/11/2003 c13 Hawk Mage
I'm sorry. I've been soo busy with school and stuff that I couldn't review on your stuff. I'm sorry. This is soo cool. It was a great story.
9/11/2003 c13 Arrow Windwhistler
Yeah, I read it all in one day. And I read this chapter right before going to school :)
9/10/2003 c13 Wildmage42
Quite an excellent end to an excellent story. I like your description of Dragon's Keep. I can really picture it. And I like the name Lyede for the inner chamber thingy.

I have a picture of Loren and Skan that I drew, if you want it. I might have a hard time getting it on my computer, since my scanner died a while back, but I can scan it at school if you want. E-mail me at and let me know if you want it.
9/10/2003 c13 14DigiDayDreamer
Hey, that was a good way to end things and tie up all the loose ends there.

Hmm, Dravidar had a brother? *looks quite reluctant to say anything* I swear, I didn't copy anything! *looks rather embarrassed* Sorry about that. It had something to do with the fourth chapter of "The Angel's Seal" (which I'm currently working on).

Back to the story, I like the interactions with the characters, most noted: the private discussion with Dravidar and the only conversation between Cytosine and Drav alone (I think).

"jumping to conclusions like a frog" Woah, that's something you don't hear every day. And quite funny. And also how Luna and Silver are popular with the dragons there.

Dragon's Keep? Reminded me of Skyra's Journey of the Runes.

Sigh, so this is the last chapter, huh? At least, there's the sequel to anticipate! ^_^ Hey, this is rather eerily familiar. *thinking of Nickel City's Dragon Warz*

Oh, and please upgrade Fur's speed.

Looking forward for the epilogue!

Spell ya later!
9/10/2003 c13 31kitfallen
great ending chapter! i'm looking forward to the last part.. why did Drav leap into the sky? o.o did he suddenly realize something? maybe he wants to give her something.. i sure dunno! ^-^; anyway, i've got a new chapter set up on Drake's story and a new story- Whitelighters and Punk Music, (a whitelighter is an angel) it's a story made between my friend Mel and i, she typed it so there are a few mistakes... but it's still funny. I like the way Spirit Guardians is coming out, i could never deal with THAT many characters, i have trouble keeping up with five! ^-^ wish you good luck with all the stories!

*the little keyblade kittykat*

(i'm going nuts over Kingdom Hearts, a video game ^-^; i'm so silly)
9/10/2003 c12 8Kezkay
bah! I'm STILL a chapter behind everyone else? Someone kick me... anyway, loved the chapter. The action sequence was very well done without drawing attention away from the characters. Hmm, I had half a hope that the Silver Fang would be more than a simple beast, more like a dog-felida or something, but if he was gonna die so quickly, no room for a new character, huh :)?

I was a little worried at the beginning, (Dravidar needs to go through some court-appointed parenting lessons) because Dravidian's dad didn't care a whit that his son fell down the pit. There was no, "No! Son! He can't have died! There is hope he lives! He died saving you!" or anything of the sort, and I was just wondering if Dravidar even loves his son 'cause Dravidian is always saying he's not so bad and that he could have done it and... wow. that was a long sentence.

As for the entire chapter, your craft kind of changed a little and I really liked it. Thou offered much insight and enlightening, O guru-mine.

"It was true that Death could not die, but it could be thwarted. And if you thought about it, Life would never die either. It would go on forever. And that was an encouraging thought."

And somewhere in there you metioned wanton...but as "wan-ton." Isn't that like, wan-ton soup? just-a wonderin'

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