for The Prize12/18/2003 c11 
4shadowdreamer7598
Lol, just as good as usual, what can i say... you should try getting published, your story is definitely good enough and long enough. :) keep up the writing
4shadowdreamer7598Lol, just as good as usual, what can i say... you should try getting published, your story is definitely good enough and long enough. :) keep up the writing
12/13/2003 c11 5Silver Eyes Bright
I got the flu too. Was out of school for two days and I'm still workin' on make up work, though I'm almost done. SO is the couple Danielle/A.J? I was kinda hopin' for Danielle/Chase . . . but you're the author! You're writing story and who knows what kind of turn of events you'll stick in here! Thats what I love about what you're writing! It keeps me on my toes and I never know what you're going to do next! Oh and you forgot to put A.J.'s shirt on! So he's just casually strolling down the hall, shirtless. Whatcha' gonna do next?
5Silver Eyes BrightI got the flu too. Was out of school for two days and I'm still workin' on make up work, though I'm almost done. SO is the couple Danielle/A.J? I was kinda hopin' for Danielle/Chase . . . but you're the author! You're writing story and who knows what kind of turn of events you'll stick in here! Thats what I love about what you're writing! It keeps me on my toes and I never know what you're going to do next! Oh and you forgot to put A.J.'s shirt on! So he's just casually strolling down the hall, shirtless. Whatcha' gonna do next?
12/11/2003 c11 4Veiled Dicast
Bah Humbug...2 years old, *huffs and pouts* well...meh, fine...you win because my brain is water logged, so totally unfair! Just UPDATE! :)
4Veiled DicastBah Humbug...2 years old, *huffs and pouts* well...meh, fine...you win because my brain is water logged, so totally unfair! Just UPDATE! :)
12/11/2003 c11 Lily Pierce
Hurrah! *happy dance* You updated! I've been waiting for this for quite awhile... I think everyone worries about Luke because... I guess because he's just so adorable, and kinda- not dumb, but naive. I think I know what the identity of his "mysterious girlfriend" is. And now you have me confused with AJ and Chase! I don't know which one to trust! I would have said Chase before, and maybe even now, but you never know... I hope you get enough time to write up chapter 12 soon!
Hurrah! *happy dance* You updated! I've been waiting for this for quite awhile... I think everyone worries about Luke because... I guess because he's just so adorable, and kinda- not dumb, but naive. I think I know what the identity of his "mysterious girlfriend" is. And now you have me confused with AJ and Chase! I don't know which one to trust! I would have said Chase before, and maybe even now, but you never know... I hope you get enough time to write up chapter 12 soon!
12/11/2003 c11 1The baava Project
Was Vicki a redhead?
*snorts and laughs* Ah hah, I'm a jaded, cynical thing aren't I? heehee. Don't worry, I fully expect you not to answer questions I put here - I'm content to wait for them to come out in the story. heehee.
Everybody loves a little citrus now and again. Danielle is such a great character - her blunders and thoughts make me laugh. Too cute, and very well written. *dreamy sigh* Good chapter!
Hope you're feeling better,
LoK
1The baava ProjectWas Vicki a redhead?
*snorts and laughs* Ah hah, I'm a jaded, cynical thing aren't I? heehee. Don't worry, I fully expect you not to answer questions I put here - I'm content to wait for them to come out in the story. heehee.
Everybody loves a little citrus now and again. Danielle is such a great character - her blunders and thoughts make me laugh. Too cute, and very well written. *dreamy sigh* Good chapter!
Hope you're feeling better,
LoK
12/11/2003 c11 14Kymik
oh... who to believe? Well I can't blame Danielle for falling for the dashing A.J... and that was a pretty good kiss. Even if he was all stinky and sweaty ;)
14Kymikoh... who to believe? Well I can't blame Danielle for falling for the dashing A.J... and that was a pretty good kiss. Even if he was all stinky and sweaty ;)
12/11/2003 c11 11DisasterousLetdown
Aww...I LOVED this chapter possibly just as much as I love this story. Update again soon!
Amy
11DisasterousLetdownAww...I LOVED this chapter possibly just as much as I love this story. Update again soon!
Amy
11/25/2003 c10 1The baava Project
All right. Who is Nyah REALLY? Hm? lol
Intrigue! A different kind of suspense! Woo hoo! *cough* I don't have anything to say apparently that's worth reading, so I'll leave this short. Good chapter, fantastic story, likeable characters! ^_^ More!
ja,
LoK
P.S. I sincerely hope your computer woes have ended by now . . .
1The baava ProjectAll right. Who is Nyah REALLY? Hm? lol
Intrigue! A different kind of suspense! Woo hoo! *cough* I don't have anything to say apparently that's worth reading, so I'll leave this short. Good chapter, fantastic story, likeable characters! ^_^ More!
ja,
LoK
P.S. I sincerely hope your computer woes have ended by now . . .
11/24/2003 c10 4shadowdreamer7598
This story is really good, and suspenseful, as I've said before. The only things is, since new chapters are uploaded so far apart in time, the interest level goes down. Just wanted to tell you. Keep writing!
4shadowdreamer7598This story is really good, and suspenseful, as I've said before. The only things is, since new chapters are uploaded so far apart in time, the interest level goes down. Just wanted to tell you. Keep writing!
11/23/2003 c10 hamsta-boi
Its like one of those christopher pike ones. and slash maybe goosebumbs too. Obviously better though. I love the way you write, with that easily format sentence thing you have going on. And well it was great! Please please continue!
Its like one of those christopher pike ones. and slash maybe goosebumbs too. Obviously better though. I love the way you write, with that easily format sentence thing you have going on. And well it was great! Please please continue!
11/21/2003 c10 Lily Pierce
*shivers* I really liked this story... it's quite addictive! I was so scared for Luke, though, several times. :) Will you be posting chapter 11 soon? I hope so!
*shivers* I really liked this story... it's quite addictive! I was so scared for Luke, though, several times. :) Will you be posting chapter 11 soon? I hope so!