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9/6/2004 c1 2RaHo
lol! how coni-ish. XD
11/22/2003 c1 37Fantwriter
Wow...You were really CHEERY when you wrote this weren't you...

No offense...but, it was Choppy...unless i didn't get the flow to it right...the rhyming wasn't that constant...

hm...the lines are so short, it makes me wonder if i AM reading it right...has to do w/ above too. Maybe that's why? O.o

See just because i know you, i give you more constructive criticism! ^^

Yeah...i guess it was pretty good...^-^
3/10/2003 c1 14The Moon and the Wind
its good. ur enthusiasm is endearing

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