for Thunderstorm4/1/2003 c1 
1TalkoftheTown4eva
Hey there! Thanx for reviewing my essay. Ms. Hamilton gave me a 95 b/c there were lots of grammar errors and stuff that I fixed before I posted it. :P O, and also, you misspelled Kendell's name. K-E-N-D-E-L-L. Yeah, but I like this poem, and there's an easy way to fix the formatting. Put a space in between each paragraph in MS Word, and the paragraphs will be separated when it's transferred to ff.net or fp.net. Example:
Rolf is so cool and he saved the team when he found the wheel.
The mixer is really cool, even though I don't know what a water jacket is.
Okay, so if I posted those two sentences on either ff or fp, they would be separate paragraphs. Okay? If you have any questions, just ask! KK, um, bye!
1TalkoftheTown4evaHey there! Thanx for reviewing my essay. Ms. Hamilton gave me a 95 b/c there were lots of grammar errors and stuff that I fixed before I posted it. :P O, and also, you misspelled Kendell's name. K-E-N-D-E-L-L. Yeah, but I like this poem, and there's an easy way to fix the formatting. Put a space in between each paragraph in MS Word, and the paragraphs will be separated when it's transferred to ff.net or fp.net. Example:
Rolf is so cool and he saved the team when he found the wheel.
The mixer is really cool, even though I don't know what a water jacket is.
Okay, so if I posted those two sentences on either ff or fp, they would be separate paragraphs. Okay? If you have any questions, just ask! KK, um, bye!
3/15/2003 c1 12Aurora Light
It has potential, but it would help if it was developed a little more. Just out of curiosity, did you get your pen-name from Jack London?
12Aurora LightIt has potential, but it would help if it was developed a little more. Just out of curiosity, did you get your pen-name from Jack London?