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4/1/2003 c1 1TalkoftheTown4eva
Hey there! Thanx for reviewing my essay. Ms. Hamilton gave me a 95 b/c there were lots of grammar errors and stuff that I fixed before I posted it. :P O, and also, you misspelled Kendell's name. K-E-N-D-E-L-L. Yeah, but I like this poem, and there's an easy way to fix the formatting. Put a space in between each paragraph in MS Word, and the paragraphs will be separated when it's transferred to ff.net or fp.net. Example:

Rolf is so cool and he saved the team when he found the wheel.

The mixer is really cool, even though I don't know what a water jacket is.

Okay, so if I posted those two sentences on either ff or fp, they would be separate paragraphs. Okay? If you have any questions, just ask! KK, um, bye!
3/15/2003 c1 12Aurora Light
It has potential, but it would help if it was developed a little more. Just out of curiosity, did you get your pen-name from Jack London?

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