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3/16/2003 c1 141E. Gao
apparently california doesn't know how to properly ease into spring. it's either not at all - winter kabaams right into summer - or it sputters a few false starts like an old car. [kicks california] I hate it here.

but about the poem, yes:

I love the imagery. love love love it. I don't know why, but I can't seem to put images to words like this, at least not for nature. [shrug] anyway, v. v. good job!

~EG
3/11/2003 c1 Laura
Oh! You are an exceptional poem writer . very descriptive and yummy. *nod* . I see too many poems elsewhere that don't describe enough, and are really, really vague. But yours rocks!

And Juncos are adorable . we see Eastern Juncos (I think that's what they're called) in our backyard near wintertime. They're slate gray with light beaks and white bellies. So cute!
3/10/2003 c1 2B-Dawg
WOW! You are awesome! I can't believe someone can write something as cool as this! You have really made my day. Keep writing, you definately have that spark in you that makes my jaw drop.
3/10/2003 c1 Pigwidgin
Wonderful poem!

It really put a smile on my face, thanks.

I can't wait to see more.

Now I'm off to check out your other work.

Take Care.

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