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6/20/2003 c1 19Andromeda
aw, that was so sad! I'm sorry about your dog :( Sometimes pets feel like they're part of the family and it's hard to lose them. I really liked the emotion behind this poem, and it had a nice flow to it, nice job!
6/20/2003 c1 72CancerianQueen
Aww... soo sad. You nearly made me cry! :'( Aww, that effect on me! :O Amazing! I'm soo sorry about your dog! Dogs aren't just dogs... they're your best friends! :)

Keep writing,

~Vnomi~
3/24/2003 c1 Needa S
I can relate a doggie is a family member and it tears your heart out. Excellent! Keep writing...
3/11/2003 c1 3GIR200
That was awesome! Beautiful! *claps* I liked your Rhyming. Very strong! If you used more voice and word choice it be even greater! Keep up the good work!
3/10/2003 c1 2B-Dawg
You really expressed my feelings when my grandfather died. And there is NOTHING wrong with being sad of a dog's death. If my dog died, I'd breakdown.maybe. You write very well, keep it up!

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