for Willy Sunshine: American Outlaw3/15/2003 c1 a person
Ahahahaha! This was so funny! I normally don't read stories like this but, this was just pure genious! You have real talent, mate. Keep up the good work!
(Blech. Christina Aguilera on radio right now...must change station)
Ahahahaha! This was so funny! I normally don't read stories like this but, this was just pure genious! You have real talent, mate. Keep up the good work!
(Blech. Christina Aguilera on radio right now...must change station)
3/15/2003 c2 
7Cheshire Rabbit
Honest! I think not! He certainly has a way with words, or dear Willy Sunshine, seems to be quite a companionable fellow, though a bit dishonest. Can't say I'd want to get in between him and something valuble.
7Cheshire RabbitHonest! I think not! He certainly has a way with words, or dear Willy Sunshine, seems to be quite a companionable fellow, though a bit dishonest. Can't say I'd want to get in between him and something valuble.
3/13/2003 c2 7Rruthmar
I don't know how you do it MIKE. I show you this site, and two days later you have 6 glowing reviews about a western of all things. Anyways, Great story and I love it, keep writing you moron. :)
7RruthmarI don't know how you do it MIKE. I show you this site, and two days later you have 6 glowing reviews about a western of all things. Anyways, Great story and I love it, keep writing you moron. :)
3/13/2003 c2 6fireintrouble
This story is great, i love the way it is narrated and the other not-so-important charcters. Keep up the good work my friend.
6fireintroubleThis story is great, i love the way it is narrated and the other not-so-important charcters. Keep up the good work my friend.
3/13/2003 c1 captain sherry
Very authentic Western style - although I don't usually read or care for Westerns, I liked your unusual presentation. Move over, Zane Grey!
Very authentic Western style - although I don't usually read or care for Westerns, I liked your unusual presentation. Move over, Zane Grey!
3/12/2003 c2 15BecomingMyself
You're good!
Make me laugh some more.
Please, write on!
Rogue Rider, huh?
15BecomingMyselfYou're good!
Make me laugh some more.
Please, write on!
Rogue Rider, huh?
3/12/2003 c1 4Wylderaven
This is brilliant! And funny as hell! Please tell me there's more to come on this character, I love him.
4WylderavenThis is brilliant! And funny as hell! Please tell me there's more to come on this character, I love him.
3/12/2003 c1 3Shmeilia Rockie
Ack! It's the attack of the nicknames! Oy, this promises to be very interesting. So was he going to open a bakery or a barbershop? *Chuckles* Yeah, he doesn't cheat. Really. Oh, I just love unreliable narrators!
Keep it up!
3Shmeilia RockieAck! It's the attack of the nicknames! Oy, this promises to be very interesting. So was he going to open a bakery or a barbershop? *Chuckles* Yeah, he doesn't cheat. Really. Oh, I just love unreliable narrators!
Keep it up!
3/11/2003 c1 15BecomingMyself
My, my that was a lovely ride!
VERY HARD LAUGHING OUT LOUD!
Write more, please?
Got a train to catch.
15BecomingMyselfMy, my that was a lovely ride!
VERY HARD LAUGHING OUT LOUD!
Write more, please?
Got a train to catch.