for I hate you!8/7/2003 c1 Lil Witch Girl
Mixed feelings...hmm...toughie, yet sad...all's I need is your birth date and I can give you an Asrology reading! The ACCURITE kind...
~LWG~
Mixed feelings...hmm...toughie, yet sad...all's I need is your birth date and I can give you an Asrology reading! The ACCURITE kind...
~LWG~
3/29/2003 c1 RisingBeauty
I like this, it made me kind of laugh. I don't think that was the right reaction, but it was because I know EXACTLY what it's like to feel like what this poem is saying. It had a nice clear message. I actually think it would have been better to not bleep out the swearing, because it kind of distracts the reader when they are reading it, and it detracts from the poem. But that's up to you. Nice job.
I like this, it made me kind of laugh. I don't think that was the right reaction, but it was because I know EXACTLY what it's like to feel like what this poem is saying. It had a nice clear message. I actually think it would have been better to not bleep out the swearing, because it kind of distracts the reader when they are reading it, and it detracts from the poem. But that's up to you. Nice job.
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