for Wagon Wheels4/30/2021 c1 ambethiiii
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
I like the characters, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to or
2/26/2010 c2 BurgundyHope
It wasn't your typical western, and I thought it was odd at first, but you did such a GREAT JOB developing the characters (especially in such a short piece) and describing things so that I felt the emotions. I ended up really liking it. Good work! :)
It wasn't your typical western, and I thought it was odd at first, but you did such a GREAT JOB developing the characters (especially in such a short piece) and describing things so that I felt the emotions. I ended up really liking it. Good work! :)
10/21/2005 c2 
3free4all-07
ah! IT'S AWESOME! I love what you've done with the characters in just two chapters! I wasn't confusing at all and i just loved all of the variety with your characters. In just those two chapters I really got connected with the characters and even the situation they were going through. Definitely write more regardless of when you last worked on it! It's great!:D If you could R&R what i've got so far i'd love it because i can tell you're a great writer and would probably have some good advice! :D thanx!
3free4all-07ah! IT'S AWESOME! I love what you've done with the characters in just two chapters! I wasn't confusing at all and i just loved all of the variety with your characters. In just those two chapters I really got connected with the characters and even the situation they were going through. Definitely write more regardless of when you last worked on it! It's great!:D If you could R&R what i've got so far i'd love it because i can tell you're a great writer and would probably have some good advice! :D thanx!
4/10/2005 c2 5Cyclonica
Wow... fabulous characters! It's my personal and humble opinion that you should continue this story, despite the fact that you wrote it in '03, because I like it and it's the only story you have with more than one chapter. Also I wanna find out what happened to Alric.
5CyclonicaWow... fabulous characters! It's my personal and humble opinion that you should continue this story, despite the fact that you wrote it in '03, because I like it and it's the only story you have with more than one chapter. Also I wanna find out what happened to Alric.
4/3/2004 c1 3David Paine
Fantastic work. Added you to my favorite others. I like the dialogue, though like many others, I'm a little overwhelmed by all the characters at first.
3David PaineFantastic work. Added you to my favorite others. I like the dialogue, though like many others, I'm a little overwhelmed by all the characters at first.
1/22/2004 c2 15shasjin-saber
I like what's here so far. The names and characters are a little confusing right now, but that's only because I haven't read enough to get to know them. I'd like to though. Please write more.
DRE & LLS
15shasjin-saberI like what's here so far. The names and characters are a little confusing right now, but that's only because I haven't read enough to get to know them. I'd like to though. Please write more.
DRE & LLS
1/6/2004 c1 Russ
A well-written opening chapter, though I did feel a litle overwhelmed by the number of characters that were thrown at me in such a short amount of time. It might help to cut some of the ancillary characters and actions from this portion and introduce those guys/gals when they begin to affect the story.
A well-written opening chapter, though I did feel a litle overwhelmed by the number of characters that were thrown at me in such a short amount of time. It might help to cut some of the ancillary characters and actions from this portion and introduce those guys/gals when they begin to affect the story.
10/15/2003 c2 Dylan Wiles
Youve done it again! I LOVE your stories. Put you on my authors and story list. I have a story called KID on this thread. Id be interested in your opinion.First effort,be cruel if you must.
Thanx
D
Youve done it again! I LOVE your stories. Put you on my authors and story list. I have a story called KID on this thread. Id be interested in your opinion.First effort,be cruel if you must.
Thanx
D
8/31/2003 c2 19Connor Triannes
Ah...! I love Alric! ^_^ Wicked story.. Reminds me of "Fortunes Journey" by Bruce Coville. :) Please do email me when you update?
19Connor TriannesAh...! I love Alric! ^_^ Wicked story.. Reminds me of "Fortunes Journey" by Bruce Coville. :) Please do email me when you update?
4/4/2003 c2 Sierra
Hey, this is really good! I'm definitely impressed.
Continue!
Sierra :)
Hey, this is really good! I'm definitely impressed.
Continue!
Sierra :)