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1/2/2006 c1 2Rhoddrin
Like how it rhymes and how the story goes further but keeps going on about just the same thing, never losing it's touch. Good that is :)
3/23/2005 c1 31A Painter of Poems
keep living even if it's only to please me with your poetry. your work is so awesome. i like how you didn't say say what the obsession was. keeps it general so that everyone can relate.
11/27/2004 c1 7DameNoire
Very nice! I'm so jealous, I'm seeing green. No really. How do you do that?

-x- DameNoire
7/12/2004 c1 49SleepDontWeep
not my fave of urs but still pretty decent! lov ya xx
6/14/2004 c1 12Raven Monarch
i wont lie by saying one day it will all be alright... but one day you will have that sweet death we all seek so badly, and may peace find u in ur endless slumber...
Sincerely
4/15/2004 c1 Ali de Lioncourt
WOW the poetry is your fort, man
it's rather good... the words and stuff u made good use of that...
well, im leaving
BYE
4/12/2004 c1 hateselfhate
I went through the same deal man... Sucks huh? Well wait till you become like me... it just gets worse, then it gets better again... Trust me.
9/21/2003 c1 31Fyre-Siren
And stay alive u ahve much to give!
7/14/2003 c1 3affinitas
This is a master piece of work. I love the rhythm of the poem! Keep it up!
6/23/2003 c1 25XxFrozenFlamExX
I don't really understand what *obsession* you are talking about, but never the less, it is quite good..you still shoud've hinted more to what it was...
6/3/2003 c1 20sar.h
I like it. I think everyone has an obsession like that at some time or another. Smoking, EATING DISORDERS, self-mutilation...and the list goes on and on. Good work. Keep it up.
6/1/2003 c1 5DrowningSin32
This was great! Reminds me of my life...I'm not sure what the obsession you wrote of was about, but mine was a boy...

Keep up the fantastic work
5/4/2003 c1 17Bob n Kazzi
Wow. That's...heartfelt. Is that just a poem, or are you basing it on real life or something?
4/30/2003 c1 8RavenPhoenix
wow... is this about drug/alcohol addiction?
3/27/2003 c1 4Winter Evoleht
hm...what was this 'obsession'? good poem.

~kitty~
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