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8/18/2008 c18 atreyu love
haha. funny ending :D
really cute :)
The two boys marrying Seren is adorable! :D
haha. funny ending :D
really cute :)
The two boys marrying Seren is adorable! :D
8/18/2008 c11 atreyu love
Keen likes her.
i cant believe that he sent her down
there, but hes going after her!
YAY!
Keen likes her.
i cant believe that he sent her down
there, but hes going after her!
YAY!
6/12/2006 c1 LethargicLove
The * stands for Not logged in. *shrugs*I know that this story is 3+ years old, but I just found it today...and I wanted to compliment you. I absolutely loved it. There were only a few parts that felt..odd and unexplained. I loved how Keen and Angel acted towards each other. To me, that is the kind of relationship that really lasts, and I enjoyed reading their fights. They almost always made me grin. Heh. Keep up the awesome work though
The * stands for Not logged in. *shrugs*I know that this story is 3+ years old, but I just found it today...and I wanted to compliment you. I absolutely loved it. There were only a few parts that felt..odd and unexplained. I loved how Keen and Angel acted towards each other. To me, that is the kind of relationship that really lasts, and I enjoyed reading their fights. They almost always made me grin. Heh. Keep up the awesome work though
6/11/2006 c18 
1Annatari
This story rocks! I think the epilogue was great, they all deserve a happy ending after what happened. Lovely story, you're a great writer.
1AnnatariThis story rocks! I think the epilogue was great, they all deserve a happy ending after what happened. Lovely story, you're a great writer.
5/9/2006 c1 3Katiefoolery
This story is so much fun! Ordinarily, I'd look askance at a character saying so much out loud, but I think it's pretty natural if you've been on your own with no human contact for the last six days.
I shall read on!
3KatiefooleryThis story is so much fun! Ordinarily, I'd look askance at a character saying so much out loud, but I think it's pretty natural if you've been on your own with no human contact for the last six days.
I shall read on!
9/17/2005 c18 8BadSweets
Aw, I LOVE this end. Your characters are awesome and this story really does leave me wanting more... more of Kiernan. More of Keen. More of Angel and more of Honey.
And the kids too! LOL
Hmm, now, let's see. I think your strong point might be dialogue and action, although you're good at everything else too. How you bring your characters alive with little things is great too. You did it pretty quickly, which is great! Altogether, I really liked this... and will read something else of yours in the undetermined future, hopefully. For now, I'm too busy to start a new story, so give me time (lots of it!).
Have a great day!
8BadSweetsAw, I LOVE this end. Your characters are awesome and this story really does leave me wanting more... more of Kiernan. More of Keen. More of Angel and more of Honey.
And the kids too! LOL
Hmm, now, let's see. I think your strong point might be dialogue and action, although you're good at everything else too. How you bring your characters alive with little things is great too. You did it pretty quickly, which is great! Altogether, I really liked this... and will read something else of yours in the undetermined future, hopefully. For now, I'm too busy to start a new story, so give me time (lots of it!).
Have a great day!
9/17/2005 c17 BadSweets
Aww! I love Angel and Keen too... I found the rain a bit of a deus ex machina, though, even if it fit the title XD Ah well. Appropriate...
Aww! I love Angel and Keen too... I found the rain a bit of a deus ex machina, though, even if it fit the title XD Ah well. Appropriate...
9/16/2005 c16 BadSweets
Whoa, it's been a crazy week. Yay for the weekend!
I loved the interaction between Angel and Honey in the beginning and Keen's jokes were good.I love your action... very well done.
I also want this story to be longer!
Whoa, it's been a crazy week. Yay for the weekend!
I loved the interaction between Angel and Honey in the beginning and Keen's jokes were good.I love your action... very well done.
I also want this story to be longer!
9/11/2005 c15 BadSweets
OOh, I like the line where he insists she looks 'adorable' 'cause that is... adorable.
And the group band together! God, I love character development. Lots of potential for it in this sort of situation. Always fun... yes. Anyway, have school tomorrow, so must get to bed.
OOh, I like the line where he insists she looks 'adorable' 'cause that is... adorable.
And the group band together! God, I love character development. Lots of potential for it in this sort of situation. Always fun... yes. Anyway, have school tomorrow, so must get to bed.
9/11/2005 c14 BadSweets
LOL Those two are so funny. When are they going to formally acknowledge what's going on?
So cute how he became a typical school boy, utterly pleased with himself.
LOL Those two are so funny. When are they going to formally acknowledge what's going on?
So cute how he became a typical school boy, utterly pleased with himself.