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8/20/2003 c1 2divinewhimsy
That lovely, its calming to, it seems to have a peaceful hint of oy to it. While I seem to get a hint of saddness as well...

Great skill you have there, its so real and realistic that it breathtaking at the same time.

-D+D
4/23/2003 c1 midary
oh wow thais is amazing. very nicely written. i dun really know what to say that would do it justice. i love the night sky myself, maybe thats why i like this so much. ^_^
4/9/2003 c1 Needa S
Awesome! Keep writing..
4/5/2003 c1 29Dai-Dai
Geez! Does the creativity and fluidity ever stop flowing with your pety? I think not! Good one!

-dani w

}the blue haired freak{

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3/13/2003 c1 212VOIDKing Ki
Ok, this has NOTHING to do with the night sky. The deeper meaning is about something else, I'll go line by line.

A clear evening sky-Pure love

Is a great mystery-Is unknown

A blanket of darkness-Hidden well

Over a large expanse-With no boundries

Yet speckled with lights-With answers (or feelings) here and there

Brilliantly shining-Clear answers (or feelings)

But only enough-With their own limits

To light a small portion-To do what they can to the whole picture

Over the vast sea of darkness-In the unknown feeling of love

Yet the light shines on-Even without answers the feelings stand

Even after the source is gone-Even when the source of the love is gone

That's what I think anyway, still. I loved this poem and the symbolism you used in it. Wonderfully marvelous, keep writing!

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