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3/16/2003 c1 2Koneko Oneesan
wow, tiffy, you really outdid yourself this time. I really really liked that. *glomp* You're so good with words! Maybe I'll be as good as you some day ^_^ hey I can dream. I love you muches.

-Dani
3/16/2003 c1 3PdcShadow
yes i like it. last verse my fave, esp. the line "You've turned into water, you used to be my air... " one thing tho- is this bit "The that way" meant to be The way that, cause it makes more sense that way. your choice neways

well written
3/15/2003 c1 74lacking motivation
really good my favorite line was the last. i think the best poems are the ones with the best endings.

lacking motivation

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