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10/26/2004 c5 41Willum
Too short of a chapter, KB. Not really a lot given in the way of info to progress the story, other than there seems to be a gov't group on the scene now.
Hope to see a new (longer) chapter soon.
9/5/2004 c4 1Moozs
I really liked this. Your dialogue and character thoughts are good. they build up a main character that could easily have been a little dull. Anyway, overall really good. Im looking forward to reading more.
9/5/2004 c4 41Willum
I'm enjoying this story, and hope that you continue with it soon. Not sure if it ties in with your previoius two, but that would seem a safe bet.
Mike is a likable character, and we can almost bet on what he has coming down the line to him, but I'll wait to see what spin you put on things.
Noticed a few grammer errors, but nothing that distracted from the story, and it's actually an easy read.
3/3/2004 c2 12restless-wandering
nice portrayel of conflicting emotions... woe to the voices inside of our heads... ;) so... what's next?
3/15/2003 c1 restless-wandering
A! YOU'RE GOING TO STOP THERE! what a cliffhanger. Just like a commercial. gr. You are going to write a second chapter. Right? I'll be waiting impatiently, lol. j/k.

Nice story, very suspensful. i can't wait until the next chapter comes out...

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