for It Snowed Today4/12/2009 c1 
4Alaskan-Lone-Wolf
Wow! Awesome poem, seriously I love the ending of this poem. It's so well done!
4Alaskan-Lone-WolfWow! Awesome poem, seriously I love the ending of this poem. It's so well done!
7/13/2003 c1 106cosmo-queen
Your poems are so deep and so well-written! I know I have said this many times but it's true. The first two stanzas were my favourite and I loved the line "an interesting juxtaposition" you used to describe them. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenYour poems are so deep and so well-written! I know I have said this many times but it's true. The first two stanzas were my favourite and I loved the line "an interesting juxtaposition" you used to describe them. Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
6/20/2003 c1 34Wasted Postage
Wonderful, wonderful work! You have great talent and I am glad you have recognized it!
34Wasted PostageWonderful, wonderful work! You have great talent and I am glad you have recognized it!
5/20/2003 c1 1aleppine
Those last two stanzas grabbed me particularly. I love the reference to sound at the start, and the contrast between the warlust one place and the effort for peace elsewhere. The theme of war is cleverly intergrated into the poem unbiasedly.
YOU ARE MY 400TH REVIEW! Lucky me, it was a pleasurable 400th read. :D
Hope your exams are going well.
1aleppineThose last two stanzas grabbed me particularly. I love the reference to sound at the start, and the contrast between the warlust one place and the effort for peace elsewhere. The theme of war is cleverly intergrated into the poem unbiasedly.
YOU ARE MY 400TH REVIEW! Lucky me, it was a pleasurable 400th read. :D
Hope your exams are going well.
4/9/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Brilliant work! I wish I have half, no - quater of your skill. I can't write poems. ^^;;
36Psycho-kyugurlBrilliant work! I wish I have half, no - quater of your skill. I can't write poems. ^^;;
3/27/2003 c1 13XxDragon Princess NikkixX
goddamnit jade! you are so amazing! i can not get enough of your poetry! I am so honored that you reviewed my poetry and actually liked it. compared to yours my poetry is as good as a 5 year old child can write!
13XxDragon Princess NikkixXgoddamnit jade! you are so amazing! i can not get enough of your poetry! I am so honored that you reviewed my poetry and actually liked it. compared to yours my poetry is as good as a 5 year old child can write!
3/21/2003 c1 124Penumbra
So sad in a soothing sort of way. Paints some clear pictures in my mind. I hope you had as good a time writing this as I had reading it! ^^
124PenumbraSo sad in a soothing sort of way. Paints some clear pictures in my mind. I hope you had as good a time writing this as I had reading it! ^^
3/15/2003 c1 39TL Demeter
wow! *take a deep breath, keep stairing at the screen* I haven't read thy poems in the longest time, I've forgotten how good thee were. A salute you and the truth of your rhymes!
T.L. Demeter
P.S. This is so going on my Favorite Stories list! ^_^
39TL Demeterwow! *take a deep breath, keep stairing at the screen* I haven't read thy poems in the longest time, I've forgotten how good thee were. A salute you and the truth of your rhymes!
T.L. Demeter
P.S. This is so going on my Favorite Stories list! ^_^
3/15/2003 c1 40TK Styles
Wonderful. Beautiful imagery, and very thought provoking. It is good to see you write a new poem. Peace.
40TK StylesWonderful. Beautiful imagery, and very thought provoking. It is good to see you write a new poem. Peace.
3/15/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
When I saw the title, I expected something different. But you still haven't failed to amaze me. Very powerful poem. Lot of emotions in it as well. I love the last line the best. Anyway, keep it up. Great job.~CT
43Carter TachikawaWhen I saw the title, I expected something different. But you still haven't failed to amaze me. Very powerful poem. Lot of emotions in it as well. I love the last line the best. Anyway, keep it up. Great job.~CT
3/15/2003 c1 64not sure yet
whoa, extremely powerful, the whole thing is amazing, the imagry and the thought process behind it is excellent, and i LOVE the ending, sort of like saying that despite the actions of people, the weather and the rest of life goes on, the whole poem has a mournful yet convicting feel to it thats incredible, seems to bring the whole thing together i think, beautiful, beatiful poem
64not sure yetwhoa, extremely powerful, the whole thing is amazing, the imagry and the thought process behind it is excellent, and i LOVE the ending, sort of like saying that despite the actions of people, the weather and the rest of life goes on, the whole poem has a mournful yet convicting feel to it thats incredible, seems to bring the whole thing together i think, beautiful, beatiful poem
3/15/2003 c1 74lacking motivation
this is a really nice poem, a thinker peice. keep up the good work
lacking motivation
74lacking motivationthis is a really nice poem, a thinker peice. keep up the good work
lacking motivation