for It's Our Life3/29/2012 c18 heyitsstupidme
i love this story and the characters wes and dillon but also robbie are really adorable and it had everything i like:
first unanswered feelings, drama, a happyend and some physical action in the end :)
i love this story and the characters wes and dillon but also robbie are really adorable and it had everything i like:
first unanswered feelings, drama, a happyend and some physical action in the end :)
12/14/2008 c18 
3InkGothical
Ohmygosh! This story is so good! I read it all today and I was so sad when there wasn't another -next chapter button- it made me sad, so I'm subscribing and I'm going to wait on the edge of my seat for you to update.
InkGothical
3InkGothicalOhmygosh! This story is so good! I read it all today and I was so sad when there wasn't another -next chapter button- it made me sad, so I'm subscribing and I'm going to wait on the edge of my seat for you to update.
InkGothical
7/1/2008 c2 Coeur Creux
Hm... I don't think any hair dye works that fast. But whatever floats you boat :).
Hm... I don't think any hair dye works that fast. But whatever floats you boat :).
5/25/2008 c18 1KaiMeiHime
omg this is some good shit here!
UPDATE SON!
don't leave me in suspense!
lol XD
luvin this story
1KaiMeiHimeomg this is some good shit here!
UPDATE SON!
don't leave me in suspense!
lol XD
luvin this story
12/19/2007 c18 2erasmuss
Ugh- I hate reaidng unfinished storied. but I didnt liek this one, even if Weston is a little wimpy and stupid, he is cute.
Hm well, no long comment.
Balh-
Like story.
Storu is good UGH!
XDD
2erasmussUgh- I hate reaidng unfinished storied. but I didnt liek this one, even if Weston is a little wimpy and stupid, he is cute.
Hm well, no long comment.
Balh-
Like story.
Storu is good UGH!
XDD
10/3/2007 c18 2arcapellago
I noticed you haven't had a chance to update this story in a while, but I hope you eventually ar able to finish it. I really really like it. The characters are really likeable and the plot is interesting. I didn't want to stop reading, but alas I got to the stopping point. I will keep an eye out for an update periodically...
-arc
2arcapellagoI noticed you haven't had a chance to update this story in a while, but I hope you eventually ar able to finish it. I really really like it. The characters are really likeable and the plot is interesting. I didn't want to stop reading, but alas I got to the stopping point. I will keep an eye out for an update periodically...
-arc
8/8/2007 c18 klamydiaa
Ah, that is a brilliant story so far.
I do hope you continue.
Thanks,
Amyy.
xx
Ah, that is a brilliant story so far.
I do hope you continue.
Thanks,
Amyy.
xx
3/29/2007 c18 7dreamerdoll
Oh, my gosh, Weston is SUCH a sweetheart, as is Dillon. And I must say, I love the name Weston...I never thought I would, but it's just so CUTE. LOL. It might be because of the character, of course. You're doing an amazing job with this story; the characters are interesting, and there's actually a problem here that had to be solved, it isn't just a romance. That oftentimes makes things so much more interesting. Anyway, you have a wonderful story here, and I can't wait to read more!
dreamerdoll
7dreamerdollOh, my gosh, Weston is SUCH a sweetheart, as is Dillon. And I must say, I love the name Weston...I never thought I would, but it's just so CUTE. LOL. It might be because of the character, of course. You're doing an amazing job with this story; the characters are interesting, and there's actually a problem here that had to be solved, it isn't just a romance. That oftentimes makes things so much more interesting. Anyway, you have a wonderful story here, and I can't wait to read more!
dreamerdoll
3/9/2007 c18 39Finwe
I really like Dillon's character; he's so sweet! And Wes is so innocent. :) Sometimes I feel like the descriptions are too detached, or too obviously put in there. For example, when you say what the char is wearing, it's just stated simply, but it sounds like you're setting a scene for a movie instead of integrating it into your story. LOL I don't really know how to get across what I'm trying to say, but I guess you don't have to be so specific in your descriptions sometimes. Umm, I guess if you don't get what I'm trying to say, give me a holler and I'll try to explain better. :)
-Finwe =^.^=
39FinweI really like Dillon's character; he's so sweet! And Wes is so innocent. :) Sometimes I feel like the descriptions are too detached, or too obviously put in there. For example, when you say what the char is wearing, it's just stated simply, but it sounds like you're setting a scene for a movie instead of integrating it into your story. LOL I don't really know how to get across what I'm trying to say, but I guess you don't have to be so specific in your descriptions sometimes. Umm, I guess if you don't get what I'm trying to say, give me a holler and I'll try to explain better. :)
-Finwe =^.^=
3/1/2007 c18 61Emma the Paradox
Ah, an update at long last! Mm, this was wonderful. You're quite talented at writing romance; I hope you know that. ^^ I'm wondering how much farther this story could possibly go, though. It seems as though maybe one, two more chapters more could possibly fit without it, like, exploding from too many plot twists. Ah, I dunno. Who am I to point that out? I'm not in your mind.. how should I know what's coming next? :]
Just thought I'd also point out that I re-read chapter 17, and you've got some repetition errors you might want to correct. For example: "We sat and talked next to the fireplace and talked while we ate my favourite Chinese food from a local takeout place called Yummy. Even after we finished eating we talked and maybe the whole things seems really cliché and corny but it’s what everyone wants from their significant other, to feel special and loved." Heh. So, they talked just how much, then? xD Ah, nonetheless, this story is WONDERFUL, and the new chapter is incredibly romantic. And sweet. And col. Good stuff.
61Emma the ParadoxAh, an update at long last! Mm, this was wonderful. You're quite talented at writing romance; I hope you know that. ^^ I'm wondering how much farther this story could possibly go, though. It seems as though maybe one, two more chapters more could possibly fit without it, like, exploding from too many plot twists. Ah, I dunno. Who am I to point that out? I'm not in your mind.. how should I know what's coming next? :]
Just thought I'd also point out that I re-read chapter 17, and you've got some repetition errors you might want to correct. For example: "We sat and talked next to the fireplace and talked while we ate my favourite Chinese food from a local takeout place called Yummy. Even after we finished eating we talked and maybe the whole things seems really cliché and corny but it’s what everyone wants from their significant other, to feel special and loved." Heh. So, they talked just how much, then? xD Ah, nonetheless, this story is WONDERFUL, and the new chapter is incredibly romantic. And sweet. And col. Good stuff.
1/1/2007 c17 iwanttodeletethiswtf
This was awesome and I loved it good job!Thanks
A.R.-MistressELEMENT
This was awesome and I loved it good job!Thanks
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