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10/1/2009 c1 63yanz
you made me feel sad. and I hadn't been feeling particularly happy all week either. But besides that, this is a great piece - i love the structure of it and I think it really captures the feeling. I love this stanza:

心﹐已毫無力氣﹐

去疼﹐去愛。

被傷得心﹐毫無希望的愛﹐消失了

Great job, keep it up, but maybe write something a little happier next time? :)
6/10/2005 c1 9Surfman
Very good poem...very angsty...but very good
12/22/2004 c1 Ryuko
First time reviewing for a Chinese piece, but good job. Sad..but well-written.
7/6/2004 c1 Moi
I like this peom a lot.. great.. but too sad..
6/22/2003 c1 Crimson-Drops
Nice poem, hehe, just one thing. You really like to make people die, or suffer, right? Hehe, I know you well enough... evil person...

Keep up the good work, want to read another one...
4/4/2003 c1 Melody
Hmm~ wat can i say? I little too melodramatic kk?

here is something for u

ÆäŒ
3/18/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
You wrote another poem in Chinese.

very nicely done. I love all the emotions. so painful, so much sorrow.

Very dark, very distrubing. You know you are a good writer when your readers shakes at your words.

I am shaking now.

Lovely job. You're a great writer.

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