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3/15/2003 c1 IrishVampire13
Wow...no wonder you got the part! You are darned good. Very descriptive, and the older tone just adds to the scene.

Two little corrections: "Taught"; that should say "taut". And "greulingly"; this is probably just a typo; the U and E should be reversed.

As I said, this is very, very well-written. *smiles* Keep it up! You're very talented. Peace!

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